The older generations tend to have very traditional ideas about how people should live, think and behave. However, some people believe that these ideas are not helpful in preparing younger generations for modern life. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this view?
It is agrued that the older generations tend to have very traditional ideas about the way people should live, think and behave, but other individuals advice that these methods are not strength in preparing adolesence for modern life. From my point of view, at some situation i mostly disagree with this notion because of its drawbacks for the teenager growth. The following essay will analyse this statement in detail.
First of all, in the international life and with the appearence of new innovation that a various of occupation has been replaced by modern technology, so traditional value is hugely significant for children life. Not only can people potential life improve graduately, but also socioeconomic will be narrowed which increase the nation development. Furthermore, numerous experience can be transmited by the older generations, providing a plenty of social knowledge and valuable information. To illustrate, there was a survey by Timer Vurdnert, the famous sicentist and professor which was about the success of postgraduate in London who combine the traditional value and modern knowledge. The statistic showed that nearly everyone has got a various of achevement in their career.
However, we can not negate the demerit of this problem for the teenager. Many historic is going to be obsolete which will not appropriate with the ideas of the young, lacking the indepentdent of students. Moreover, the creative of adolesence can be annoyed, harmful influence will be led by this trouble.
To conclude, by my agrument from the essay that i totally disagree with this statement since it have some negative aspect for the teenager. Each parent need to have clear plans to advance their children for the nation improvement.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 140, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'individuals'' or 'individual's'?
Suggestion: individuals'; individual's
...hould live, think and behave, but other individuals advice that these methods are not stren...
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Line 2, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ill analyse this statement in detail. First of all, in the international life ...
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Message: Use simply 'innovation'.
Suggestion: innovation
...ational life and with the appearence of new innovation that a various of occupation has been r...
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Line 3, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...arious of achevement in their career. However, we can not negate the demerit o...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...nfluence will be led by this trouble. To conclude, by my agrument from the ess...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, furthermore, however, if, moreover, so, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 21.0 24.0651302605 87% => OK
Preposition: 38.0 41.998997996 90% => OK
Nominalization: 16.0 8.3376753507 192% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1462.0 1615.20841683 91% => OK
No of words: 277.0 315.596192385 88% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.27797833935 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.07962216107 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.91194567185 2.80592935109 104% => OK
Unique words: 163.0 176.041082164 93% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.58844765343 0.561755894193 105% => OK
syllable_count: 464.4 506.74238477 92% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 51.6636825505 49.4020404114 105% => OK
Chars per sentence: 112.461538462 106.682146367 105% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.3076923077 20.7667163134 103% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.38461538462 7.06120827912 76% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.247326784814 0.244688304435 101% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0749938633147 0.084324248473 89% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.118300401012 0.0667982634062 177% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.147082892207 0.151304729494 97% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.119788963939 0.056905535591 211% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.1 13.0946893788 108% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 41.7 50.2224549098 83% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.34 12.4159519038 107% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.64 8.58950901804 112% => OK
difficult_words: 87.0 78.4519038076 111% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 15.0 9.78957915832 153% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 10.7795591182 139% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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