Some people say that music is a good way of bringing people of different cultures and ages together.
To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion?
Some individuals present argue that music as a means of entertainment is a reason for gathering people with different attitudes towards the culture and with different age groups. I also strongly disagree with this statement.
On the one hand, in my opinion, people who love a specific sign or a specific music style have the same cultural value and at the same time belong to a specific age group it's not true about 100% of their followers but for the majority of them are true. For instance, rock music or rap music with some insult words or very high tempo only followed by typical people and if you check their personalities you can find their similarities.
Moreover, in terms of bringing people from other cultures together maybe you can bring them up but I think it's only before the first gathering or concert, for example, I have a point of view that it's a process of changing cultural aspect that is stored from that moment because I believe music is one of the important means of creating cultures. so that person in that concert had a paradigm-shifting in terms of cultural belief and sooner or later he converted to a person with the same cultural values the same as other people in that concert.
On the other hand, music plays a key role in the new lifestyle not only among youth but also in other generations so it can be considered as an opportunity for no people, for instance, some people believe that you can make a relationship with a person who has the same taste in music genre or you can get along with others in society only due to the music taste. so it is obvious that music gathers people from the same group as a hobby, not a different cultural mindset.
To conclude, music is a way to know other people and knows their personality, however, in my opinion, they are from the same culture with very small differences and the majority of them are from the same age group which follows a specific music style or band.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, however, if, may, moreover, so, for example, for instance, i think, in my opinion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 16.0 10.4138276553 154% => OK
Relative clauses : 12.0 7.30460921844 164% => OK
Pronoun: 35.0 24.0651302605 145% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 47.0 41.998997996 112% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1603.0 1615.20841683 99% => OK
No of words: 351.0 315.596192385 111% => OK
Chars per words: 4.56695156695 5.12529762239 89% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.32839392791 4.20363070211 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.54620534573 2.80592935109 91% => OK
Unique words: 164.0 176.041082164 93% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.467236467236 0.561755894193 83% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 519.3 506.74238477 102% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 16.0721442886 56% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 39.0 20.2975951904 192% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 97.1482258087 49.4020404114 197% => OK
Chars per sentence: 178.111111111 106.682146367 167% => OK
Words per sentence: 39.0 20.7667163134 188% => OK
Discourse Markers: 13.1111111111 7.06120827912 186% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.3409744778 0.244688304435 139% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.169318120301 0.084324248473 201% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0506250021258 0.0667982634062 76% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.219376843151 0.151304729494 145% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0529809276513 0.056905535591 93% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 19.6 13.0946893788 150% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 40.35 50.2224549098 80% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 17.3 11.3001002004 153% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.82 12.4159519038 79% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.14 8.58950901804 95% => OK
difficult_words: 57.0 78.4519038076 73% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 9.78957915832 138% => OK
gunning_fog: 17.6 10.1190380762 174% => OK
text_standard: 18.0 10.7795591182 167% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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