A nation should require all its students to study the same national curriculum until they enter college.
Recent educational trend shows that there is an argument about the national curriculam should be same or different for the students. Many people believe that the curriculam should be same for all of the students before entering at the college. The promts is about this and it says that a nation should require all of its students to study the same national curruculum until they enter college. I mostly agree with this for two reasons, which I elucidated below. I do concede that the study curruculam should need to be changed and modified for this.
Every student should have given the same opportunities so that there won't be any discrepency on the educational curriculam they are getting. The same curriculam will keep everything at the same quality and thus there won't be any difference between what they are learning so, this will give them equal benefits of choosing their college field.
Students don't have any knowledge of any of the fields before entering the school. If there are different curriculams then they will face some confusion on choosing the field which will be better for their upcoming future. But as they are not experience enough, they will find difficulties while taking the decision and there would be possibilities that their decision would not be the right one. So if there is exact curriculam for all of the students then the students won't have to face this difficulties.
However, same curriculam for everyone will make every students to study same thing whether they like it or not. Some students may find indifferent to some subjects so they won't be focus at them. Thus the curriculam should be modified so that the students will find in attractive.
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- A nation should require all its students to study the same national curriculum until they enter college 50
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- The following appeared in a letter to the editor of Parson City s local newspaper In our region of Trillura the majority of money spent on the schools that most students attend the city run public schools comes from taxes that each city government collect 60
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Simply use 'all the'.
Suggestion: all the
... that the curriculam should be same for all of the students before entering at the college...
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Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: don't
...osing their college field. Students dont have any knowledge of any of the fields...
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Message: Consider simply using 'of' instead.
Suggestion: of
...d. Students dont have any knowledge of any of the fields before entering the school. ...
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Message: Simply use 'all the'.
Suggestion: all the
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Message: Did you mean 'these'?
Suggestion: these
...nts then the students wont have to face this difficulties. However, same curricul...
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Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Thus,
...subjects so they wont be focus at them. Thus the curriculam should be modified so th...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, however, if, may, so, then, thus, while
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 19.5258426966 87% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 17.0 12.4196629213 137% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 14.8657303371 47% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 9.0 11.3162921348 80% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 31.0 33.0505617978 94% => OK
Preposition: 26.0 58.6224719101 44% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 3.0 12.9106741573 23% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1407.0 2235.4752809 63% => OK
No of words: 285.0 442.535393258 64% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.93684210526 5.05705443957 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.10876417139 4.55969084622 90% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.58391930327 2.79657885939 92% => OK
Unique words: 135.0 215.323595506 63% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.473684210526 0.4932671777 96% => OK
syllable_count: 442.8 704.065955056 63% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.59117977528 101% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 6.24550561798 64% => OK
Article: 2.0 4.99550561798 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.10617977528 32% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.77640449438 56% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 4.38483146067 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 20.2370786517 69% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 20.0 23.0359550562 87% => OK
Sentence length SD: 37.3611715937 60.3974514979 62% => OK
Chars per sentence: 100.5 118.986275619 84% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.3571428571 23.4991977007 87% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.14285714286 5.21951772744 60% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.97078651685 80% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 7.80617977528 77% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 10.2758426966 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 5.13820224719 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.83258426966 83% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.332769174678 0.243740707755 137% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.138024927299 0.0831039109588 166% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.151858597866 0.0758088955206 200% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.210553477663 0.150359130593 140% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.118772063586 0.0667264976115 178% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.0 14.1392134831 85% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 48.8420337079 105% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 12.1743820225 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.37 12.1639044944 93% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.23 8.38706741573 86% => OK
difficult_words: 47.0 100.480337079 47% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 11.8971910112 71% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 11.2143820225 89% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 11.7820224719 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5/6 paragraphs with 3/4 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: reason 4. address both of the views presented for reason 4 (optional)
para 6: conclusion.
Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.