Some people think that physical strength is important for success in sport, while other people
think that mental strength is more important. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.
While some proponents believe that the success of athletes is mainly decided by physical strength, the others argue that the importance of having a strong mind is more significant. This essay will shed light on both views before concluding that body strength is more important to succeed in sport.
Great mental strength prevents athletes from giving up and helps them concentrate during contests. Professional athletes need to go through intense training sessions in a long period of time, which could be boring and exhausting. If their mind are weak, they will lose their determination and stop trying to reach their success. Additionally, those people need a stable state of mind to maintain concentration during important competitions. Basketball and soccer, for instance, require high levels of mental strength as the teams’ spirit decide their victories.
The basis for every athlete to success in their career is physical strength. While the others do exercises to stay healthy, those who want to success in sport need outstanding body strength. Weight lifting athletes win when they lift the most weight or marathon athletes win the gold metals when they reach the finishing line first, for example. They also need a more resilient body than normal people as their training courses could be dangerous. Their body could, as a result, get serious injuries and if it couldn’t recover, their career would be finished. In those circumstances, even if they have great mind strength, success is still far to reach without physical strength.
In conclusion, while strong minds could benefit athletes in certain aspects, I believe that having good body strength is more significant for their success.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 176, Rule ID: PERIOD_OF_TIME[1]
Message: Use simply 'period'.
Suggestion: period
...ugh intense training sessions in a long period of time, which could be boring and exhausting. ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, if, so, still, while, for example, for instance, in conclusion, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 7.85571142285 140% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 25.0 24.0651302605 104% => OK
Preposition: 29.0 41.998997996 69% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1438.0 1615.20841683 89% => OK
No of words: 271.0 315.596192385 86% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.30627306273 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.05734859645 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.68399901455 2.80592935109 96% => OK
Unique words: 156.0 176.041082164 89% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.575645756458 0.561755894193 102% => OK
syllable_count: 405.0 506.74238477 80% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 6.0 2.10420841683 285% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 26.2045524943 49.4020404114 53% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 102.714285714 106.682146367 96% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.3571428571 20.7667163134 93% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.28571428571 7.06120827912 89% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.288734373731 0.244688304435 118% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.112419009354 0.084324248473 133% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0809921718686 0.0667982634062 121% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.201827938042 0.151304729494 133% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0852158259988 0.056905535591 150% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.3 13.0946893788 102% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 60.65 50.2224549098 121% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 11.3001002004 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.52 12.4159519038 109% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.13 8.58950901804 95% => OK
difficult_words: 61.0 78.4519038076 78% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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