The best way to reduce poverty in developing countries is by giving up to six years of free education, so that they can at least read, write and use numbers. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
It is thought that the most appropriate method to decrease poverty in developing countries is by giving up to six years of free education for the adolesence. From my point of view, in some situation i mostly agree with this notion because of its benefits and pratical for the resident life. The following essay will analyse this statement in detail.
First of all, in the industrialized world and with the apearence of modern technology that numerous people have replaced by new innovation such as automatic robots, so professional education is greatly significant for the development of their country. Not only does this phenomenon provide academic, social experience and valuable information for postgraduates which improve their mentality life and cognitive systerm, but also the propotion of illiterate people in their nation will be reduced gradually, advanced the economic background. Furthermore, the socioeconomic can be narrowed where all teenager have the same opportunity to access universities's environment. To illutrate, there was a survey by Hinter Jin, the famous interviewer and professor, who is expert about the success of european countries where their government pay attention in education improvement. The statistic demonstrated that nearly every countries has got plenty of achievement.
However, we can not negate the drawback of this problems for the society. If the government are concentrate too much of education's investment, they will forget the other value of life such as entertainment and medical, and also the creative and independent abilities of teenagers can be annoyed by this affection. Moreover, many government take advantage from this investment for their own revenue, various harmful influenc will be led by this action to the young generation.
To conclude, though my agrument from the essay, i totally agree with this statement, but it still have some negative aspects for the resident. The state need to have clear plans to improve their citizens for the nation's development.
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... this action to the young generation. To conclude, though my agrument from the...
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...agree with this statement, but it still have some negative aspects for the resident....
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...plans to improve their citizens for the nations development.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, furthermore, however, if, moreover, so, still, such as, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 26.0 24.0651302605 108% => OK
Preposition: 40.0 41.998997996 95% => OK
Nominalization: 27.0 8.3376753507 324% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1710.0 1615.20841683 106% => OK
No of words: 313.0 315.596192385 99% => OK
Chars per words: 5.46325878594 5.12529762239 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.20616286096 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.05397220283 2.80592935109 109% => OK
Unique words: 196.0 176.041082164 111% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.626198083067 0.561755894193 111% => OK
syllable_count: 542.7 506.74238477 107% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 0.809619238477 371% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 20.2975951904 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 69.4769980241 49.4020404114 141% => OK
Chars per sentence: 131.538461538 106.682146367 123% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.0769230769 20.7667163134 116% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.61538461538 7.06120827912 94% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 5.01903807615 139% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.121152526143 0.244688304435 50% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0468952653237 0.084324248473 56% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0707553481755 0.0667982634062 106% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0760410987877 0.151304729494 50% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0558363717457 0.056905535591 98% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.3 13.0946893788 124% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 38.66 50.2224549098 77% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.8 11.3001002004 122% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.68 12.4159519038 118% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.17 8.58950901804 118% => OK
difficult_words: 106.0 78.4519038076 135% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 15.5 9.78957915832 158% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.1190380762 115% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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