Living in a country where you have to speak a foreign language can cause serious social problems as well as practical problems. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?
In recent years, speaking different language has emerged as a significant problem worldwide. Speaking another language in foreign country can lead to real social consequences. I agree with this view. In this essay, I will express my opinion with relevant examples.
Living in new country require learning second language in order to communicate with more people. If you can not learn it. As a result, you may not be able to understand them. This means facing social issue and less interaction between groups settle in the same area. For instance, individuals who lived in America and need to join a party, could fall in misunderstanding, if they behave in different way. Because , they did not know the other social views of behaviors. Hence, it is essential to gain languages for many reasons. Especially, for communication with others.
On the other hand, A number of people tend to make relations with others, who have various dialects, but in a number of cases they got bad results regarding accent or language. This issue makes gaps in people's relationships lead to culture failure.
For example, if person work in restaurant and try to serve food to customer, then discovered, it is done in incorrect way, this means, it is not like this in their culture.
To conclude, People need to obtain range of languages to overcome social and culture issues. So, it is better for social and culture aspects and can expand the knowledge of new views and their mindset.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 40, Rule ID: AFFORD_VB[1]
Message: This verb is used with the infinitive: 'to second'
Suggestion: to second
... Living in new country require learning second language in order to communicate with m...
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Line 3, column 98, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “If” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
... order to communicate with more people. If you can not learn it. As a result, you ...
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Line 3, column 406, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “Because” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...nding, if they behave in different way. Because , they did not know the other social vi...
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Line 3, column 414, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...f they behave in different way. Because , they did not know the other social view...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, hence, if, may, regarding, second, so, then, for example, for instance, as a result, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 13.1623246493 38% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 7.30460921844 27% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 22.0 24.0651302605 91% => OK
Preposition: 40.0 41.998997996 95% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1229.0 1615.20841683 76% => OK
No of words: 247.0 315.596192385 78% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.97570850202 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.96437052324 4.20363070211 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.75334143322 2.80592935109 98% => OK
Unique words: 154.0 176.041082164 87% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.623481781377 0.561755894193 111% => OK
syllable_count: 375.3 506.74238477 74% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 5.43587174349 202% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 20.2975951904 69% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 43.1529026878 49.4020404114 87% => OK
Chars per sentence: 72.2941176471 106.682146367 68% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.5294117647 20.7667163134 70% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.29411764706 7.06120827912 89% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 9.0 3.4128256513 264% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.263634731665 0.244688304435 108% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0835432778489 0.084324248473 99% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0595781124216 0.0667982634062 89% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.12776813733 0.151304729494 84% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.09626931052 0.056905535591 169% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.3 13.0946893788 71% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 65.73 50.2224549098 131% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.6 11.3001002004 67% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.01 12.4159519038 89% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.49 8.58950901804 99% => OK
difficult_words: 65.0 78.4519038076 83% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 5.0 9.78957915832 51% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 7.6 10.1190380762 75% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.7795591182 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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