Some people believe that it is helpful to view a challenging situation as an opportunity for personal growth. Others believe that reimagining challenging situations this way occupies too much of the focus one needs to face challenges effectively.
Write a response in which you discuss which view more closely aligns with your own position and explain your reasoning for the position you take. In developing and supporting your position, you should address both of the views presented
The is a notable sayin “What doesn’t kill you makes you stronger”. This is applicable to challenging situations because they provide opportunities for personal development in areas that were not previously thought possible. But as the second view states sometimes considering challenges this way put too much mental consideration on the outcome and not the process. As such, the second view most closely aligns with my position and I would but explaining my reasoning in this response.
Firstly, let’s consider the Graduate Record Exam (GRE). Writing the exam provides an opportunity to think at a capacity that is not usually required in everyday life. This results in the development of a new reasoning ability, an example of personal growth. A graduate of Pharmacy who has not been exposed to the quantitative reasoning in during his undergraduate study is challenged by the level of arithmetic reasoning and accuracy required pass the exam. But with continuous efforts he gets a grasp of what is required and is also able to apply in his personal life. This challenginf situation provides the stage for a development in an foreign aspect.
Similarlt, studies have shown that taking on challenges outside ones comfort zone develops and strengthens neural synaptic pathways in the brain. The ability to do things that were previously considered impossible is the result of this neurological improvement. For instance, a reticent scientist who is mandated to regularly present his scientific findings at a research conference may initially be challenged by the thought of doing so. However, continuously doing so builds that public speaking capacity and courage he did not have before. This signifies personal growth of that scientist.
However, productive and beneficial challenging situations may seems, there is the risky of placing too much emphasis on the predicited beneficial outcomes. An individual who is determined to build his physical physique initially welcomes the challenges of the rigours of the gym because he is focuse on the end results. BUT The excessive focus on the promised outcome causes him to loose hope when he does not see results immediately. This is was is implies by the second view. The consistent dependence on the outcome defeats the entire purpose focusing on the process to achieve personal development.
In conclusion, challenging situation are beneficial as they help to strengthen previously unused neurological pathways. However, they is the still the risk of excessive dependent on the outcome rather that the process.
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Essay evaluations by e-grader
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 181, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...quired in everyday life. This results in the development of a new reasoning abili...
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Line 3, column 637, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'a' instead of 'an' if the following word doesn't start with a vowel sound, e.g. 'a sentence', 'a university'
Suggestion: a
...provides the stage for a development in an foreign aspect. Similarlt, studies h...
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Line 7, column 383, Rule ID: LOOSE_LOSE[3]
Message: Did you mean 'lose' (= miss, waste, suffer the loss etc.)?
Suggestion: lose
...s on the promised outcome causes him to loose hope when he does not see results immed...
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Line 7, column 441, Rule ID: VBZ_VBD[1]
Message: Did you mean 'it'?
Suggestion: it
... does not see results immediately. This is was is implies by the second view. The ...
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Line 7, column 444, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'been'.
Suggestion: been
...es not see results immediately. This is was is implies by the second view. The cons...
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Line 9, column 135, Rule ID: NON3PRS_VERB[2]
Message: The pronoun 'they' must be used with a non-third-person form of a verb: 'be'
Suggestion: be
...ed neurological pathways. However, they is the still the risk of excessive depende...
^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, however, if, may, second, so, still, then, for instance, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 20.0 19.5258426966 102% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 12.4196629213 24% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 14.8657303371 74% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 11.3162921348 97% => OK
Pronoun: 32.0 33.0505617978 97% => OK
Preposition: 50.0 58.6224719101 85% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 12.9106741573 93% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2175.0 2235.4752809 97% => OK
No of words: 404.0 442.535393258 91% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.38366336634 5.05705443957 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.48327461151 4.55969084622 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.03656582937 2.79657885939 109% => OK
Unique words: 219.0 215.323595506 102% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.542079207921 0.4932671777 110% => OK
syllable_count: 683.1 704.065955056 97% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.59117977528 107% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 6.24550561798 96% => OK
Article: 8.0 4.99550561798 160% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.10617977528 32% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 1.77640449438 169% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.38483146067 23% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 22.0 20.2370786517 109% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 23.0359550562 78% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 39.9598972525 60.3974514979 66% => OK
Chars per sentence: 98.8636363636 118.986275619 83% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.3636363636 23.4991977007 78% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.40909090909 5.21951772744 84% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 7.80617977528 77% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 10.2758426966 117% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 5.13820224719 97% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.83258426966 103% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.298791216511 0.243740707755 123% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0816602851038 0.0831039109588 98% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0668096168 0.0758088955206 88% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.161476830288 0.150359130593 107% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0432897253444 0.0667264976115 65% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.1 14.1392134831 93% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 44.75 48.8420337079 92% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 12.1743820225 94% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.92 12.1639044944 114% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.26 8.38706741573 110% => OK
difficult_words: 121.0 100.480337079 120% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 11.8971910112 71% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 11.2143820225 82% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.7820224719 76% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 83.33 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 6
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 181, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...quired in everyday life. This results in the development of a new reasoning abili...
^^
Line 3, column 637, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'a' instead of 'an' if the following word doesn't start with a vowel sound, e.g. 'a sentence', 'a university'
Suggestion: a
...provides the stage for a development in an foreign aspect. Similarlt, studies h...
^^
Line 7, column 383, Rule ID: LOOSE_LOSE[3]
Message: Did you mean 'lose' (= miss, waste, suffer the loss etc.)?
Suggestion: lose
...s on the promised outcome causes him to loose hope when he does not see results immed...
^^^^^
Line 7, column 441, Rule ID: VBZ_VBD[1]
Message: Did you mean 'it'?
Suggestion: it
... does not see results immediately. This is was is implies by the second view. The ...
^^
Line 7, column 444, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'been'.
Suggestion: been
...es not see results immediately. This is was is implies by the second view. The cons...
^^^
Line 9, column 135, Rule ID: NON3PRS_VERB[2]
Message: The pronoun 'they' must be used with a non-third-person form of a verb: 'be'
Suggestion: be
...ed neurological pathways. However, they is the still the risk of excessive depende...
^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, however, if, may, second, so, still, then, for instance, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 20.0 19.5258426966 102% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 12.4196629213 24% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 14.8657303371 74% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 11.3162921348 97% => OK
Pronoun: 32.0 33.0505617978 97% => OK
Preposition: 50.0 58.6224719101 85% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 12.9106741573 93% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2175.0 2235.4752809 97% => OK
No of words: 404.0 442.535393258 91% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.38366336634 5.05705443957 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.48327461151 4.55969084622 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.03656582937 2.79657885939 109% => OK
Unique words: 219.0 215.323595506 102% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.542079207921 0.4932671777 110% => OK
syllable_count: 683.1 704.065955056 97% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.59117977528 107% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 6.24550561798 96% => OK
Article: 8.0 4.99550561798 160% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.10617977528 32% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 1.77640449438 169% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.38483146067 23% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 22.0 20.2370786517 109% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 23.0359550562 78% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 39.9598972525 60.3974514979 66% => OK
Chars per sentence: 98.8636363636 118.986275619 83% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.3636363636 23.4991977007 78% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.40909090909 5.21951772744 84% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 7.80617977528 77% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 10.2758426966 117% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 5.13820224719 97% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.83258426966 103% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.298791216511 0.243740707755 123% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0816602851038 0.0831039109588 98% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0668096168 0.0758088955206 88% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.161476830288 0.150359130593 107% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0432897253444 0.0667264976115 65% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.1 14.1392134831 93% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 44.75 48.8420337079 92% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 12.1743820225 94% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.92 12.1639044944 114% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.26 8.38706741573 110% => OK
difficult_words: 121.0 100.480337079 120% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 11.8971910112 71% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 11.2143820225 82% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.7820224719 76% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 83.33 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 6
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.