Some people think an international car-free day is an effective way to reduce air pollution. Others think there are more effective ways to do this. Discuss both sides and give your opinion.
Nowadays transportation is one of the biggest reasons for polluting the environment.some public thinks that an international car-free day is best to reduce worsening and other thinks that there are other far-off to lessen abuse.In this essay, I will explain both views and give my opinion.
on one hand, there are many benefits to applying international car-free day. it will reduce more harmful chemicals and carbon dioxide emission from cars and motorbikes as well as it gives air quality on that day.moreover, citizens will travel public transports it will beneficial government and planet to reduce the infection.for instance,in some countries authorities increased the fuel price to reduce the use of transportation instead of the nation using public transportation. one day car-free effects so many ways but in my ,opinion there are other ways also there to reduce the pollution.
on the other hand, the government should launch environmental campaigns to raise the citizen's awareness and folk can also use bicycles and public buses to decrease degradation.however,governments can impose green taxes on factories which pump the decline into the atmosphere. an international car-free day is a temporary solution and the atmosphere quality will worsen as soon as cars return to the roads.in addition, electric vehicles are a better alternative to fossil-fuel-powered engines to reduce or completely stop the burning of coal and other fuels.for example, last 2 years covid pandemic,all the communities do not come outside many cities faced a better environment and after the lockdown cars are come to the roads and polluted by the environment.
In conclusion, the international car-free day is temporary in my opinion there are many ways to do to reduce air corruption and every individual and government response to reduce air worsen.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, moreover, so, well, for example, for instance, in addition, in conclusion, as well as, in my opinion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 10.4138276553 144% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 11.0 24.0651302605 46% => OK
Preposition: 35.0 41.998997996 83% => OK
Nominalization: 16.0 8.3376753507 192% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1561.0 1615.20841683 97% => OK
No of words: 287.0 315.596192385 91% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.43902439024 5.12529762239 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.11595363751 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.51637174924 2.80592935109 125% => OK
Unique words: 157.0 176.041082164 89% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.547038327526 0.561755894193 97% => OK
syllable_count: 500.4 506.74238477 99% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 7.0 16.0721442886 44% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 41.0 20.2975951904 202% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 137.230626676 49.4020404114 278% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 223.0 106.682146367 209% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 41.0 20.7667163134 197% => OK
Discourse Markers: 19.8571428571 7.06120827912 281% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 19.0 5.01903807615 379% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.379982149893 0.244688304435 155% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.191018510669 0.084324248473 227% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.112321886928 0.0667982634062 168% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.246459827433 0.151304729494 163% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0735832831352 0.056905535591 129% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 24.7 13.0946893788 189% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 21.4 50.2224549098 43% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 13.0 7.44779559118 175% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 20.5 11.3001002004 181% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.16 12.4159519038 122% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.13 8.58950901804 118% => OK
difficult_words: 81.0 78.4519038076 103% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 20.0 9.78957915832 204% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 18.4 10.1190380762 182% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.