The diagram below shows the process of producing smoked fish
The given pictures highlight the process by which smoked fish is made.
Overall, there are 13 total stages in the diagram, starting with catching fish from the ocean and ending with distributing it to be sold in the fish shop.
In the initial step, fish are caught by the large nets in the ocean or sea and then transported by ships back to the port where fish are stored and frozen. Before sending the fish to be smoked, they are first thawed out in freshwater in order to remove any impurities and then cut open into suitable pieces. Following that, the fish are dropped down the salt water tank with yellow coloring before moving on to the next step.
Once the fish have been smoked, they are packaged into boxes and frozen at 0 degrees celsius. After that, they are kept in the cold store for a certain period of time and then loaded onto trucks for distribution to fish shops to sell to customers.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 7, column 154, Rule ID: PERIOD_OF_TIME[1]
Message: Use simply 'period'.
Suggestion: period
...re kept in the cold store for a certain period of time and then loaded onto trucks for distrib...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, so, then
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 7.0 157% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 6.8 103% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.15609756098 127% => OK
Pronoun: 6.0 5.60731707317 107% => OK
Preposition: 33.0 33.7804878049 98% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.97073170732 25% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 752.0 965.302439024 78% => OK
No of words: 165.0 196.424390244 84% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.55757575758 4.92477711251 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.58402463422 3.73543355544 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.16991703641 2.65546596893 82% => OK
Unique words: 104.0 106.607317073 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.630303030303 0.547539520022 115% => OK
syllable_count: 225.0 283.868780488 79% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 1.53170731707 196% => OK
Article: 2.0 4.33902439024 46% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.07073170732 187% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 3.36585365854 89% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 7.0 8.94146341463 78% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 22.4926829268 102% => OK
Sentence length SD: 32.2218078009 43.030603864 75% => OK
Chars per sentence: 107.428571429 112.824112599 95% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.5714285714 22.9334400587 103% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.85714285714 5.23603664747 55% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 1.69756097561 59% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 3.70975609756 54% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.09268292683 98% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.200044723916 0.215688989381 93% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0979321759651 0.103423049105 95% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0713066210016 0.0843802449381 85% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.139833602778 0.15604864568 90% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0706176092358 0.0819641961636 86% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.8 13.2329268293 89% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 65.05 61.2550243902 106% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 10.3012195122 96% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.46 11.4140731707 83% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.22 8.06136585366 102% => OK
difficult_words: 36.0 40.7170731707 88% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.0 11.4329268293 114% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.9970731707 102% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 11.0658536585 108% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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