Nowadays, a growing number of people with health problems are trying
alternative medicines and treatments instead of visiting their usual doctor.
Do you think this is a positive or a negative development?
In today's world, more and more people with health problems want to look for an alternative instead of seeing their doctors. This is because of the high cost of medical care and the consequent tendency to increase morbidity and mortality.
On the one hand, the wave of use of other drugs is due to the fact that medical services are price-gouging, whereby people cannot afford to pay their medical bills, thus forcing them to look for other solutions. for your health problems. For example, in today's world, some patients with incurable diseases cannot pay insurance premiums and without health insurance, medical examination costs are expensive before even thinking about medicine costs. They feel frustrated and seek bargains from herbalists, where they think their problem will be solved but it makes their situation worse.
Therefore, this development leads to life-threatening situations as it increases morbidity and mortality as these measures taken are not the right ones, most of which are based on The testing methods, therefore, left them in a bad state, leaving behind a number of complications. Bedridden and unlucky people perished. For example, the increase in maternal and child mortality rates in developing countries is due to the patronage of some charlatans who lack basic knowledge and are not certified by the regulatory board of that state. .
Furthermore, some sick people have a certain strange belief that their illness may be something so they seek solutions in spiritual houses such as churches, mosques and even temples. blank transmission. The environment is not clean, all the patients are malnourished, the dead are buried around. However, this is not the solution to their worries as they only make the situation worse and increase the death rate.
In short, look for other care methods to treat the disease rather than using specialist drugs, today's services are enhancing many health benefits for those with the disease, this can help the recovery. change about the dangers ahead.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, furthermore, however, if, look, may, so, therefore, thus, for example, in short, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 24.0 24.0651302605 100% => OK
Preposition: 39.0 41.998997996 93% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1697.0 1615.20841683 105% => OK
No of words: 323.0 315.596192385 102% => OK
Chars per words: 5.25386996904 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.23936324884 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.71776566144 2.80592935109 97% => OK
Unique words: 194.0 176.041082164 110% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.600619195046 0.561755894193 107% => OK
syllable_count: 519.3 506.74238477 102% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 79.071669319 49.4020404114 160% => OK
Chars per sentence: 121.214285714 106.682146367 114% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.0714285714 20.7667163134 111% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.64285714286 7.06120827912 94% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 8.0 3.9879759519 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.186166360711 0.244688304435 76% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0553808095186 0.084324248473 66% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0490400092082 0.0667982634062 73% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.100317102934 0.151304729494 66% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0481016670796 0.056905535591 85% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.8 13.0946893788 113% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 48.13 50.2224549098 96% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.47 12.4159519038 108% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.03 8.58950901804 105% => OK
difficult_words: 87.0 78.4519038076 111% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.