The charts below show the class size of four states of Australia
The bar charts depict the percentage of the capacity of classes for children in several different states in Australia. Overall, the smallest rate belonged to the class can possess more than 30 individuals in all four states.
It can easily be seen that in the central territory, the figure about classes can contain 21 to 25 students constituted 51% which was more than half of total classes, and was twofold the classes’ information that can accommodate less than 20 learners, at 20%. Meanwhile, higher than the 20% data is the proportion of classes with a capacity of 26 to 30 students, accounted for 27%.
Moving to other states of Australia (Western, New South Wales, and South States), all of its was witnessed 3% that was data for the classes’ capacity exceeded 30 students. In addition, the highest percentage was expressed differently, 43% in Western states for 21-25 students size classes, 44% for the number of classes with roughly 26-30 learners in South states, and 40% for the classes’ rate with less than 20 students. The remaining classes accounted for about 25 to 30 percent in general.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 81, Rule ID: NUMEROUS_DIFFERENT[1]
Message: Use simply 'several'.
Suggestion: several
...the capacity of classes for children in several different states in Australia. Overall, the small...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, so, while, in addition, in general
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 7.0 100% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 1.00243902439 399% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 3.0 6.8 44% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.15609756098 127% => OK
Pronoun: 5.0 5.60731707317 89% => OK
Preposition: 27.0 33.7804878049 80% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.97073170732 76% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 923.0 965.302439024 96% => OK
No of words: 186.0 196.424390244 95% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.9623655914 4.92477711251 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.69299088775 3.73543355544 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.70835968129 2.65546596893 102% => OK
Unique words: 102.0 106.607317073 96% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.548387096774 0.547539520022 100% => OK
syllable_count: 257.4 283.868780488 91% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 5.0 4.33902439024 115% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 3.0 0.482926829268 621% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 3.36585365854 59% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 7.0 8.94146341463 78% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 26.0 22.4926829268 116% => OK
Sentence length SD: 68.7925007778 43.030603864 160% => OK
Chars per sentence: 131.857142857 112.824112599 117% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.5714285714 22.9334400587 116% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.42857142857 5.23603664747 104% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 3.83414634146 78% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 1.0 1.69756097561 59% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 3.70975609756 54% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.09268292683 122% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.201504688267 0.215688989381 93% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.110680558316 0.103423049105 107% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0676533993676 0.0843802449381 80% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.160445354744 0.15604864568 103% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.080959532206 0.0819641961636 99% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.2 13.2329268293 115% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 62.01 61.2550243902 101% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 10.3012195122 108% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.78 11.4140731707 103% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.17 8.06136585366 114% => OK
difficult_words: 50.0 40.7170731707 123% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 11.4329268293 127% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 10.9970731707 113% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 11.0658536585 108% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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