Some people think that children should begin their formal education at a very early age. Some think they should begin at at least 7 years old. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.
While a number of people considered that children should start learning at an early age. Others hold the view that children must be at least 7 years old to begin their studying career. Personally, I am strongly convinced by the given idea.
At the outset, it is crucial to learn about the importance of early education on children. While the children are still at a very early age, their absorption abilities are higher than most adults. For example, when it comes to learning new languages, younger children are likely to perform better and be able to speak the languages more fluently than the older children. As smaller children feel more comfortable and not afraid to express themselves among other people. In addition, early education helps children to develop well-prepared for their study later on in school. This allows them to do well academically, resulting in higher academic productivity.
On the other hand, in many countries, students start their learning career when they are at least 7 years old. The reasons for this idea might be because children at this age are fully prepared with basic skills such as communication, learning and so on. This allows them to immerse themselves in an academic environment and be independent of their studies. Moreover, as they become older, their brain functions are significantly developed, as a result build a foundation of knowledge in various fields, helping children to learn all the subjects in their school. Secondly, 7-year-old children have better endurance and problem solving skills to deal with many assignments and the huge workload that school requires.
In summary, education plays an important role in children's development and not every child's ability is the same. Therefore parents should consider what is the suitable age for their children to start their learning career and don’t let children study too early as it might bring drawbacks instead of benefits as some people consider.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 1, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “While” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
While a number of people considered that chil...
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Line 7, column 114, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Therefore,
...d not every childs ability is the same. Therefore parents should consider what is the sui...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, moreover, second, secondly, so, still, therefore, well, while, at least, for example, in addition, in summary, such as, as a result, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 26.0 24.0651302605 108% => OK
Preposition: 41.0 41.998997996 98% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.3376753507 132% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1658.0 1615.20841683 103% => OK
No of words: 317.0 315.596192385 100% => OK
Chars per words: 5.23028391167 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.21953715646 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.73244032591 2.80592935109 97% => OK
Unique words: 180.0 176.041082164 102% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.567823343849 0.561755894193 101% => OK
syllable_count: 491.4 506.74238477 97% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 6.0 2.10420841683 285% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 44.4599099611 49.4020404114 90% => OK
Chars per sentence: 103.625 106.682146367 97% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.8125 20.7667163134 95% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.625 7.06120827912 136% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 14.0 8.67935871743 161% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.309266466593 0.244688304435 126% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.10893541574 0.084324248473 129% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0922380871699 0.0667982634062 138% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.215166319252 0.151304729494 142% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0769592499545 0.056905535591 135% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.1 13.0946893788 100% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 50.2224549098 104% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.05 12.4159519038 105% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.71 8.58950901804 101% => OK
difficult_words: 83.0 78.4519038076 106% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.