The population of many cities is growing rapidly. What are effects on people living in these city? What can be done to maintain the quality of life of people?
It is true that, in recent days, the number of people living in cities increases significantly. This phenomenal has several impacts on local people in these cities, as well as quality of their lives; therefore, government should implement particular solutions to tackle this problem.
The increasing population density in cities brings numerous negative effects on people’s lives. To commence with, the huge influx of people moving from urban areas to cities means that the number of vehicles in these cities also increases, leading to the traffic congestion. Many research studies have shown that people in big cities have to face traffic jams almost every single day, especially in rush hours. Moreover, the housing capacity also need to increase for the growing populayion. Goverment may construct more housese and building, leading to the scarcity of available land, less green landscapes as well as less public space for all people.
To maintain the quality of life of people, some solution should be implemented to adress these issues. Firstly, government can build high-rise appartments with multiple floors and units which can accomodate a large number of resident within a small footprint. This can help cities maximize the efficient of limited land in city without sprawling into green spaces or encroaching on natural landscapes. In addition, city’s authorities should invest in infrastructures to make sure that public transports can reach to everyone, consequently, encourage people use public transports instead of private vehicles, leading to mitigating traffic congestion.
In conclusion, while the growing poplulation density in cities can have a detrimental effects on people’s life, with certain options, these problems can be tackled and the quality of life can still be maintained.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 208, Rule ID: LARGE_NUMBER_OF[1]
Message: Specify a number, remove phrase, or simply use 'many' or 'numerous'
Suggestion: many; numerous
...e floors and units which can accomodate a large number of resident within a small footprint. This...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, consequently, first, firstly, if, may, moreover, so, still, therefore, well, while, as to, in addition, in conclusion, as well as, it is true
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 13.1623246493 30% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 7.85571142285 153% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 10.4138276553 38% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 13.0 24.0651302605 54% => OK
Preposition: 46.0 41.998997996 110% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.3376753507 132% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1537.0 1615.20841683 95% => OK
No of words: 277.0 315.596192385 88% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.54873646209 5.12529762239 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.07962216107 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.83807327371 2.80592935109 101% => OK
Unique words: 171.0 176.041082164 97% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.617328519856 0.561755894193 110% => OK
syllable_count: 466.2 506.74238477 92% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 49.6042672896 49.4020404114 100% => OK
Chars per sentence: 128.083333333 106.682146367 120% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.0833333333 20.7667163134 111% => OK
Discourse Markers: 12.25 7.06120827912 173% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.398243884535 0.244688304435 163% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.140253241151 0.084324248473 166% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0952313682459 0.0667982634062 143% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.249857792112 0.151304729494 165% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0683414198833 0.056905535591 120% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.3 13.0946893788 124% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 39.67 50.2224549098 79% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.4 11.3001002004 119% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.21 12.4159519038 123% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.08 8.58950901804 117% => OK
difficult_words: 93.0 78.4519038076 119% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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