In their advertising, businesses nowadays usually emphasize that their products are new in some way.
Why is this? Do you think it is a positive or negative development?
It is true that, in the modern era, lots of businesses often focus people's attention on the innovation of their products in their advertisements. This practice can be attributed to a number of reasons and I am personally of the opinion that this trend will likely be a positive development.
There are two primary reasons associated with this phenomenon. Firstly, by pointing up the value of new features of their products, businesses could attract more consumers, and as a result, they could generate more profits. This can be exemplified in the case of smartphones, as every year, brands in this field always come up with new versions of their products, and they often state that new smartphones come with new technologies and added features such as more camera lenses or new chipsets for better performance. Consequently, buyers, especially those finding up-to-date products tend to pay for them. The second reason can be ascribed to the competitiveness between companies in the same industry. One business may compete with another by introducing and spotlighting its innovation and this is true in terms of development as companies always seek to be the leading one in their field.
From my point of view, such a practice like this is definitely a positive development. As a matter of fact, all of these actions are a part of competition between the suppliers which eventually is crucial to not just the growth of the company itself, but also that of the economy as well. In addition, rivalry among businesses would allow various choices for consumers, as more upgraded products are released every year, people would have more options to find the perfect product that meets their requirements the most.
In conclusion, this practice is a result of competitiveness and financial purposes among businesses. Furthermore, I am inclined to the view that this is a beneficial development.
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- In their advertising businesses nowadays usually emphasize that their products are new in some way Why is this Do you think it is a positive or negative development 73
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, consequently, first, firstly, furthermore, if, may, second, so, well, in addition, in conclusion, such as, as a matter of fact, as a result, it is true
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 32.0 24.0651302605 133% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 49.0 41.998997996 117% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1587.0 1615.20841683 98% => OK
No of words: 309.0 315.596192385 98% => OK
Chars per words: 5.1359223301 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.1926597562 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.04714168079 2.80592935109 109% => OK
Unique words: 169.0 176.041082164 96% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.546925566343 0.561755894193 97% => OK
syllable_count: 496.8 506.74238477 98% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 0.809619238477 371% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 66.3348150846 49.4020404114 134% => OK
Chars per sentence: 122.076923077 106.682146367 114% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.7692307692 20.7667163134 114% => OK
Discourse Markers: 12.4615384615 7.06120827912 176% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.226807180848 0.244688304435 93% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0752614766319 0.084324248473 89% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.054509293731 0.0667982634062 82% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.134617042573 0.151304729494 89% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0551136297941 0.056905535591 97% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.7 13.0946893788 112% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 48.13 50.2224549098 96% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.83 12.4159519038 103% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.66 8.58950901804 101% => OK
difficult_words: 76.0 78.4519038076 97% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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