The diagram below shows one method of manufacturing ceramic pots.
The picture shows the process by which pots are prepared.
Overall, the process of preparing pots appears to be composed of 12 main steps which can be divided into 2 distinct sets of processes. In the first part, material of pots are transported to factory. In the second. Pots are given it's shape until they are prepared and it is coloured.
Firstly, materials are rowed in the ground and it is transported to factory in the big Man transports. for preparing pots. If materials don't go to the factory, pots may be not be prepared by factory's workers. In the second work, materials are crushed and mixed with water until it they will be moduled. After it is dried about 4-6 hours, they are assembled clay pots.
Ready things are put into place in the special oven 1000 degrees celcius. Then they are coloured by people. Before they are colour fired. It was a last work. Because after the last work, pots are finished.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 104, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: For
...d to factory in the big Man transports. for preparing pots. If materials dont go to...
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Line 5, column 137, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: don't
...ports. for preparing pots. If materials dont go to the factory, pots may be not be p...
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Line 7, column 109, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “Before” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...cius. Then they are coloured by people. Before they are colour fired. It was a last wo...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, if, may, second, then
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 20.0 7.0 286% => Less to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 1.00243902439 299% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 3.0 6.8 44% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.15609756098 63% => OK
Pronoun: 11.0 5.60731707317 196% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 26.0 33.7804878049 77% => OK
Nominalization: 0.0 3.97073170732 0% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 763.0 965.302439024 79% => OK
No of words: 164.0 196.424390244 83% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.65243902439 4.92477711251 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.57858190836 3.73543355544 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.37102621627 2.65546596893 89% => OK
Unique words: 97.0 106.607317073 91% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.591463414634 0.547539520022 108% => OK
syllable_count: 230.4 283.868780488 81% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 1.53170731707 131% => OK
Article: 2.0 4.33902439024 46% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 1.07073170732 374% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 3.36585365854 149% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 8.94146341463 168% => OK
Sentence length: 10.0 22.4926829268 44% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 33.2244889602 43.030603864 77% => OK
Chars per sentence: 50.8666666667 112.824112599 45% => More chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 10.9333333333 22.9334400587 48% => More words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 2.46666666667 5.23603664747 47% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 1.69756097561 177% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 3.70975609756 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 1.13902439024 263% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 9.0 4.09268292683 220% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0913217949687 0.215688989381 42% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0326530222312 0.103423049105 32% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0480288551453 0.0843802449381 57% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0787192191001 0.15604864568 50% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0589132238015 0.0819641961636 72% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 5.9 13.2329268293 45% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 78.25 61.2550243902 128% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 4.8 10.3012195122 47% => Flesch kincaid grade is low.
coleman_liau_index: 8.51 11.4140731707 75% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.79 8.06136585366 97% => OK
difficult_words: 38.0 40.7170731707 93% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 5.0 11.4329268293 44% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 6.0 10.9970731707 55% => Gunning_fog is low.
text_standard: 6.0 11.0658536585 54% => The average readability is low. Need to imporve the language.
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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