The most important aim of science should be to improve people’s lives.
To what extent do you agree or disagree?
During mankind history every time which human use the science could extremely improve the quality of his/her life. In my opinion, the most important aim of every field of science is help to lives people getting better.
On the one hand, medical is one fields of science which our lives involve with this a lot. Over time it advanced and new approaches presented. This field is very crucial in human’s lives because can getting progress the level quality of people significantly. For example, in recent global disaster that every government faced with COVID-19 if there are not any vaccine and preventive measures the number of dead increased daily. Although it is don’t have eliminate yet, no one else gets this virus. When a person getting sick if doesn’t go to doctor and use the antibiotic she/he is not feeling well. Hence, the medical science can help to quality of our lives.
Another point is the growth of technology that has an important role in our lives. The smart phones, internet, websites, and vehicles have special place in our lives. In the past there was not any telephones and people for connecting by each other either should travel to another city or used telegraph that takes long time. By presentation of smart phones not only do call to each other but also use the internet and visit different online shops to buy needs that both save money and time. Therefore, technology play an important role to progress of our lives.
In conclusion, it might very field of science has different purpose but the most important their aims is improve the quality of people’s lives.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 445, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'done'.
Suggestion: done
...of dead increased daily. Although it is don’t have eliminate yet, no one else gets ...
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Line 2, column 456, Rule ID: HAVE_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Use past participle here: 'eliminated'.
Suggestion: eliminated
...reased daily. Although it is don’t have eliminate yet, no one else gets this virus. When ...
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Line 4, column 106, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'improved'.
Suggestion: improved
...se but the most important their aims is improve the quality of people’s lives.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, hence, if, so, therefore, well, for example, in conclusion, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 21.0 24.0651302605 87% => OK
Preposition: 34.0 41.998997996 81% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1330.0 1615.20841683 82% => OK
No of words: 273.0 315.596192385 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.87179487179 5.12529762239 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.06481385082 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.43315552531 2.80592935109 87% => OK
Unique words: 155.0 176.041082164 88% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.567765567766 0.561755894193 101% => OK
syllable_count: 423.0 506.74238477 83% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 4.76152304609 168% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 37.2302147306 49.4020404114 75% => OK
Chars per sentence: 88.6666666667 106.682146367 83% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.2 20.7667163134 88% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.6 7.06120827912 79% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.194277973396 0.244688304435 79% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0652303895954 0.084324248473 77% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.083007613631 0.0667982634062 124% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.153151681873 0.151304729494 101% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0860938911097 0.056905535591 151% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.6 13.0946893788 81% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 61.67 50.2224549098 123% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 11.3001002004 81% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.97 12.4159519038 88% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.77 8.58950901804 90% => OK
difficult_words: 56.0 78.4519038076 71% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 9.78957915832 77% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.7795591182 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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