The most important aim of science should be to improve people’s lives.
To what extent do you agree or disagree?
During the time numerous different research has been done in various subjects, therefore a lot of people believe that Scientifics should notice to improve the quality of human lives .In my opinion, the most important aim of every field of science is to help lives people get better.
On the one hand, medicine is one field of science in which our lives involve a lot. Over time it advanced and new approaches were presented. This field is very crucial in human lives because can progress the level of quality of people significantly. For example, in the recent global disaster that every government faced with COVID-19 if there were not any vaccine and preventive measures the number of dead increased daily. Although it has not been eliminate yet, no one else gets this virus. When a person gets sick if doesn’t go to the doctor and use the antibiotic she/he is not feeling well. Hence, medical science can help to quality of our lives.
Another point is the growth of technology which has an important role in our lives. Smartphones, the internet, websites, and vehicles have a special place in our lives. In the past, there were no telephones, and people connected by each other either traveled to another city or used a telegraph which took a long time. By presentation of smart phones not only do call to each other but also use the internet and visit different online shops to buy needs that both save money and time. Therefore, technology plays an important role in the progress of our lives.
In conclusion, it might every field of science has a different purpose but the most important aim is improve the quality of people’s lives.
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Suggestion: numerous
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Suggestion: improved
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, hence, if, so, therefore, well, for example, in conclusion, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 16.0 24.0651302605 66% => OK
Preposition: 38.0 41.998997996 90% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1365.0 1615.20841683 85% => OK
No of words: 285.0 315.596192385 90% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.78947368421 5.12529762239 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.10876417139 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.54211918682 2.80592935109 91% => OK
Unique words: 156.0 176.041082164 89% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.547368421053 0.561755894193 97% => OK
syllable_count: 440.1 506.74238477 87% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 8.0 4.76152304609 168% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 59.5392170535 49.4020404114 121% => OK
Chars per sentence: 97.5 106.682146367 91% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.3571428571 20.7667163134 98% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.0 7.06120827912 85% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.204159539814 0.244688304435 83% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0636468437372 0.084324248473 75% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0876986725678 0.0667982634062 131% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.165148879052 0.151304729494 109% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.103333914981 0.056905535591 182% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.3 13.0946893788 86% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 59.64 50.2224549098 119% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.5 12.4159519038 85% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.79 8.58950901804 91% => OK
difficult_words: 57.0 78.4519038076 73% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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