In many countries, people are now living longer than ever before. Some people say an ageing population creates problems for governments. Other people think there are benefits if society has more elderly people.
To what extent do the advantages of having an ageing population outweigh the disadvantages?
In some there is not any legislate about increasing new child and these countries have moer elderly people than some else. In according to some it is good and has benefits for society while other people believe that it makes create problems for governments. In my opinion, there are more benefit if the population of a society get younger but elderly can help in some cases.
On the one hand, elderly people who are specialists are useful for governments. Not only can they help youth people and consult them in their special perfessinal but also it makes create a sense of motivation inside new employers. In addition governments by pay a very low pension can support their help. Hence elderly people are useful for society. But by increasing elderly people in a country, it can not get promoted because these people don’t have enough motivated about various science and subjects, also elderly people can not do heavy physical works.
On the other hand, govenments for solving such problem have to set a good role for families to increase their population. By this the average age of society decrease and new generation can solve hard and difficult problems which old people cannot. Young people always have big dreams and ambitious that are very good features. Although employees look for young force they ask a high salary to gain. They prefer chooe elderly people with low salary and high experience in many cases which make the rate of life extendency in youth reduced. Therefore, governments should thing about such problems and consider them.
In conclusion, in my opinion despite many benefit of elderly people there are lots of disadvantages that can effect on different life of young people.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: A noun should not follow "who". Try changing to a verb or maybe to 'who is a are'.
Suggestion: who is a are
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Suggestion: addition,
... of motivation inside new employers. In addition governments by pay a very low pension c...
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Suggestion: Hence,
...ery low pension can support their help. Hence elderly people are useful for society. ...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...salary and high experience in many cases which make the rate of life extendency i...
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Message: Possible agreement error. The noun benefit seems to be countable; consider using: 'many benefits'.
Suggestion: many benefits
... In conclusion, in my opinion despite many benefit of elderly people there are lots of dis...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, hence, if, look, so, therefore, while, in addition, in conclusion, in many cases, in my opinion, in some cases, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 20.0 24.0651302605 83% => OK
Preposition: 34.0 41.998997996 81% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1423.0 1615.20841683 88% => OK
No of words: 286.0 315.596192385 91% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.97552447552 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.11236361783 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.50329383483 2.80592935109 89% => OK
Unique words: 153.0 176.041082164 87% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.534965034965 0.561755894193 95% => OK
syllable_count: 455.4 506.74238477 90% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 9.0 4.76152304609 189% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 41.3422571012 49.4020404114 84% => OK
Chars per sentence: 94.8666666667 106.682146367 89% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.0666666667 20.7667163134 92% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.33333333333 7.06120827912 132% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.01903807615 120% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.397946682281 0.244688304435 163% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.143814063303 0.084324248473 171% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0777164110474 0.0667982634062 116% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.253756740048 0.151304729494 168% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0783612946709 0.056905535591 138% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.6 13.0946893788 89% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 50.2224549098 104% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.6 12.4159519038 93% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.0 8.58950901804 93% => OK
difficult_words: 62.0 78.4519038076 79% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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