As well as making money, businesses also have social responsibilities. Do you agree or disagree?
There are many opinions about the idea that businesses have a responsibility to society belong with make money. In my opinion, I agree that making money and social responsibilities have a correlated relationship.
Social development is connected with company earnings. First, the improvement of resident’s life could bring more profit to the enterprise. When the expenditure of inhabitants is raised due to higher income, they are more willing to pay for the products, which helps to raise the company’s revenue. Second, the effectiveness of the firm processes depends heavily on social infrastructure. For example, road quality has a profound impact on factory transportation. If there were many obstacles like potholes, the time for transport processes would take longer. Third, the higher life quality of workers would raise their work quality. When achieving a work-life balance, staff tend to put more effort and creativity into their jobs. As a result, improving the worker’s attitude has a positive effect on the customers with the company’s first impression.
There are several ways for the enterprises to contribute to society. Schools are places that have many potential customers that enterprises should take into account. Annually, the companies could provide many scholarships for schools or charities as a means to enhance their overall image and reputation. In addition, before waste disposal into the environment, firms should cooperate with the proper water processes that could bring health benefits for the surrounding inhabitants.
In conclusion, the responsibility fulfillment of the company not only makes more money but also improves the society’s life.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, if, second, so, third, for example, in addition, in conclusion, as a result, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 13.1623246493 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 10.4138276553 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 11.0 24.0651302605 46% => OK
Preposition: 30.0 41.998997996 71% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1443.0 1615.20841683 89% => OK
No of words: 255.0 315.596192385 81% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.65882352941 5.12529762239 110% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.99608801488 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.13299711072 2.80592935109 112% => OK
Unique words: 157.0 176.041082164 89% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.61568627451 0.561755894193 110% => OK
syllable_count: 452.7 506.74238477 89% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 6.0 2.52805611222 237% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 5.0 2.10420841683 238% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 20.2975951904 74% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 32.5662785716 49.4020404114 66% => OK
Chars per sentence: 90.1875 106.682146367 85% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.9375 20.7667163134 77% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.75 7.06120827912 96% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 3.4128256513 205% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.170148449042 0.244688304435 70% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0632846885003 0.084324248473 75% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.112206995939 0.0667982634062 168% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.16121245266 0.151304729494 107% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.156706037946 0.056905535591 275% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.2 13.0946893788 101% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 39.33 50.2224549098 78% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.25 12.4159519038 123% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.52 8.58950901804 111% => OK
difficult_words: 83.0 78.4519038076 106% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 9.78957915832 77% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.1190380762 79% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.7795591182 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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