Some people believe that our ever-increasing use of technology significantly reduces our opportunities for human interaction. Other people believe that technology provides us with new and better ways to communicate and connect with one another.
Write a response in which you discuss which view more closely aligns with your own position and explain your reasoning for the position you take. In developing and supporting your position, you should address both of the views presented.
It is not uncommon for someone to argue that it is technology that reduces people's communication with each other. The proponents based on the idea that more and more people like to immerse themselves in watching movie or playing computer games on smartphones rather than keeping contact with human being in flesh. However, although some people will spend more time in virtual devices, I think technology is beneficial for people to connect with one another.
It is widely accepted that the time spent on smart devices have already taken people's time to meet with friends or have a dinner with family members. For one thing, the emergence of cellphone makes it possible for people to work all the time wherever they are at home or in office, which will take people's time to manage freely. For example, someone would like to have a cup of coffee with one of his old friends after work, at this time, a phone call from his boss intervene this perfect plan, resulting for him in going back to work. For another, many people would dig themselves into the computer games in order to relieve from the actual word. Playing games means people are immersed in the world by themselves with no one bothers them. This spare time, however, gradually makes people become indolent and isolated with the whole society. To make things worse, some people will lose the capacity to talk with human as they cannot tolerate the difference between virtual people and actual human.
However, the disadvantages listed above can be avoided, and ,in some case, it is not the fault on technology. For the first disadvantage that phone call would occupy people's spare time to meet with friends. Although sometimes people have to obey the conduction from their bosses, they can choose what time to do. People who refuse to meet their friend asserts that it is boss's conduction that he have to do. But if they cherish the chance to communicate with their friends, they would meet at another time. So it turns out to be an excuse. Another drawback is that spending many time in playing computer games. Well, I believe it is people's personality which contributes to this, even if people don't have smart devices, they will read books in order to evade form meeting with other people.
Although technology will bring those drawbacks listed above, it will have some advantages over the disadvantages. The first benefit is that technology can narrow the distance among people all over the world. Whether people love to keep contact with their family member or would like to make friend with people in foreign country, the usage of technology will make them come true. In ancient times, if people want to contact with their children far away, the only thing they can do is to write letters. However, it would take months to receive the reply. Nowadays, a phone call can make people hear each other's voice, thus would probably enhance the communication with others as not only is it quickly, but also it is convenient. Moreover, the highway and airplanes also make it convenient for people to travel all around, which gives people chance to communicate different people and get to know other customs.
In conclusion, I believe it is technology that promotes people's communication with each other.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 116, Rule ID: HAVE_A_BREAKFAST[1]
Message: When we speak of types of meals, the article is not required: 'have dinner'.
Suggestion: have dinner
...en peoples time to meet with friends or have a dinner with family members. For one thing, the...
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Line 3, column 537, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...esulting for him in going back to work. For another, many people would dig themselv...
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Line 5, column 60, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...antages listed above can be avoided, and ,in some case, it is not the fault on tec...
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Line 5, column 575, Rule ID: MANY_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun time seems to be countable; consider using: 'many times'.
Suggestion: many times
...cuse. Another drawback is that spending many time in playing computer games. Well, I beli...
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Line 5, column 696, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: don't
...ich contributes to this, even if people dont have smart devices, they will read book...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, however, if, moreover, so, thus, well, for example, i think, in conclusion, for one thing
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 19.5258426966 92% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 20.0 12.4196629213 161% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 14.8657303371 74% => OK
Relative clauses : 14.0 11.3162921348 124% => OK
Pronoun: 53.0 33.0505617978 160% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 86.0 58.6224719101 147% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 12.9106741573 70% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2716.0 2235.4752809 121% => OK
No of words: 556.0 442.535393258 126% => OK
Chars per words: 4.88489208633 5.05705443957 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.85588840946 4.55969084622 106% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.40798524504 2.79657885939 86% => OK
Unique words: 261.0 215.323595506 121% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.469424460432 0.4932671777 95% => OK
syllable_count: 851.4 704.065955056 121% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.59117977528 94% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 12.0 6.24550561798 192% => OK
Article: 9.0 4.99550561798 180% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 3.10617977528 161% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.77640449438 113% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.38483146067 114% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 26.0 20.2370786517 128% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 23.0359550562 91% => OK
Sentence length SD: 44.5850029181 60.3974514979 74% => OK
Chars per sentence: 104.461538462 118.986275619 88% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.3846153846 23.4991977007 91% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.11538461538 5.21951772744 79% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 7.80617977528 64% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 16.0 10.2758426966 156% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 5.13820224719 136% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.83258426966 62% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.331826786393 0.243740707755 136% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.115205945491 0.0831039109588 139% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.086103946951 0.0758088955206 114% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.254714128041 0.150359130593 169% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0709188633743 0.0667264976115 106% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.2 14.1392134831 86% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 58.62 48.8420337079 120% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.92365168539 39% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 12.1743820225 85% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.02 12.1639044944 91% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.6 8.38706741573 91% => OK
difficult_words: 103.0 100.480337079 103% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 11.8971910112 113% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 11.2143820225 93% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.7820224719 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 66.67 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 4.0 Out of 6
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.