Claim: Many problems of modern society cannot be solved by laws and the legal system.
Reason: Laws cannot change what is in people's hearts or minds.
Write a response in which you discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree with the claim and the reason on which that claim is based.
In modern days, there are many social issues residing in our lives. Thus, it is debatable how can these problems be resolved. I disagree with the statement that laws and legal system cannot solve variety of problems of modern world, and I also disagree with the reason as well, that people’s minds can be changed by enacting laws.
First, in individuals’ lives, there are many more issues that can be resolved by leveraging laws. Take divorce, for example. Divorce rate is taking a big part in the United States, and the number is increasing nowadays. Issues with the failure of marriage, or other family problems are residing in current society, and many people are using laws as instruments in order to get out of those troubles. As a result, individuals can enlighten their lives by using laws to solve their pivotal issues.
Second, legal system can make a change to many social issues. For example, vaccine issues regarding COVID-19, many people did not want to take newly develop vaccines, which were not fully tested for human. However, the government protested citizens to take vaccines, or if they were not able to engage in social life. By making legal systems that encourage people to take vaccines, made most of the people to take vaccines such as Pfizar, and Moderna. As a result, people were able to live in a safer society protected from Corona virus.
Moreover, peoples’ mind and hearts can be changed by laws and legal system. To illustrate, take marriage for example. Even if one of the couple does not want to end marriage, it has to be ended if the law says it. Like so, enacting laws or having a legal system may not cover all individuals’ minds.
In summary, many social issues can be resolved by enacting laws and using legal systems in a right way. Government and leaders should use this tool wisely to develop our nation into a better world.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, however, if, may, moreover, regarding, second, so, thus, well, as to, for example, in summary, such as, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 19.5258426966 82% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 12.4196629213 81% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 14.8657303371 81% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 11.3162921348 44% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 17.0 33.0505617978 51% => OK
Preposition: 42.0 58.6224719101 72% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 12.9106741573 23% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1554.0 2235.4752809 70% => OK
No of words: 325.0 442.535393258 73% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.78153846154 5.05705443957 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.24591054749 4.55969084622 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.45187333283 2.79657885939 88% => OK
Unique words: 170.0 215.323595506 79% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.523076923077 0.4932671777 106% => OK
syllable_count: 501.3 704.065955056 71% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.59117977528 94% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 6.24550561798 64% => OK
Article: 1.0 4.99550561798 20% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.10617977528 97% => OK
Conjunction: 6.0 1.77640449438 338% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 6.0 4.38483146067 137% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 20.2370786517 94% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 23.0359550562 74% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 42.857620364 60.3974514979 71% => OK
Chars per sentence: 81.7894736842 118.986275619 69% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.1052631579 23.4991977007 73% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.73684210526 5.21951772744 129% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 7.80617977528 77% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 10.2758426966 97% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 5.13820224719 117% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.83258426966 62% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.286598290859 0.243740707755 118% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0871327975426 0.0831039109588 105% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0995628707528 0.0758088955206 131% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.170899577962 0.150359130593 114% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0917532080366 0.0667264976115 138% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.6 14.1392134831 68% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 62.68 48.8420337079 128% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.92365168539 39% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 12.1743820225 71% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.15 12.1639044944 83% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.12 8.38706741573 97% => OK
difficult_words: 75.0 100.480337079 75% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 11.8971910112 55% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 8.8 11.2143820225 78% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.7820224719 76% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.