The experience of work is more important than having education. do you agree or disagree?
An increasing trend in today's world is the emergence of the argument that the experience of work is important than having a qualification. This essay will discuss the advantages and disadvantages of the above statement concerned with the notion, that the experience of work is more important, using a practical approach.
At the outset their are several benefits in favor of my stance, the most significant one includes not only the betterment of society but also the growth of every individual on the planet. Thanks to the benefits offered one can not only attain greater success but can also enhance his productivity, efficiency, and quality of life with greater ease. Other factors impacted by the statement are confidence, courage and motivation.
Furthermore, the people having work experience are more smart than people having only knowledge, but it is true reality that an illiterate person can never be a boss. So, we can never ignore the importance of education in every field of work. Educated people are well-organized in their routine and work experience as well as in order to maintain a factory or field. They are better option than experienced persons who are not well educated. On contrary, education does not give you real life work experience, that is the reason one can lag behind. Hence, we can deduce that qualification is important but we can not ignore the importance of experience.
To conclude, from my perspective, the government of Pakistan is taking great initiative in educating its citizens against the negative impacts of the statement that experience only is better than education. Citizens are being encouraged to adhere to applicable laws and regulations to bring prosperity, efficiency, productivity and development of country.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, furthermore, hence, if, so, well, as well as, it is true
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 10.5418719212 161% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 6.10837438424 131% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 8.36945812808 131% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 5.94088669951 118% => OK
Pronoun: 19.0 20.9802955665 91% => OK
Preposition: 36.0 31.9359605911 113% => OK
Nominalization: 25.0 5.75862068966 434% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1485.0 1207.87684729 123% => OK
No of words: 283.0 242.827586207 117% => OK
Chars per words: 5.24734982332 5.00649968141 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.10153676581 3.92707691288 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.03246098914 2.71678728327 112% => OK
Unique words: 156.0 139.433497537 112% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.551236749117 0.580463131201 95% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 492.3 379.143842365 130% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.57093596059 108% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 4.6157635468 130% => OK
Article: 4.0 1.56157635468 256% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 0.0 1.71428571429 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 0.931034482759 215% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 3.65517241379 109% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 12.6551724138 103% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.5024630542 102% => OK
Sentence length SD: 43.0449056838 50.4703680194 85% => OK
Chars per sentence: 114.230769231 104.977214359 109% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.7692307692 20.9669160288 104% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.15384615385 7.25397266985 71% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.33497536946 37% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 6.9802955665 143% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 2.75862068966 72% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 2.91625615764 34% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.295859408551 0.242375264174 122% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.100157563689 0.0925447433944 108% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0852375469174 0.071462118173 119% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.161771934835 0.151781067708 107% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.124050058227 0.0609392437508 204% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.2 12.6369458128 112% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 41.7 53.1260098522 78% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 6.54236453202 171% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 10.9458128079 116% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.17 11.5310837438 114% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.03 8.32886699507 108% => OK
difficult_words: 78.0 55.0591133005 142% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 9.94827586207 141% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.3980295567 100% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.5123152709 133% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 85.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 76.5 Out of 90
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