The working week should be shorter and workers should have longer weekend.
Do you agree or disagree?
It is obvious that people need to relaxation during their work period. According to some, believe time work should be short and they have longer weekend, while some else do not think so. I strongly agree with the first opinion and in following give you some information about my decision.
On the one hand, people should have enough time to spend their time with their families, and a very good plan for their work. Not only can this make to more focus of people on their careers and high rate of exploitation but is also, makes a sense of satisfying from their employees. For instance, in Japan employees have to relax during their work and have about four days weekend that leads to improve their economic. Hence, it is necessary to have enough time to devoted it spending with your family. But time off should not be longer than usual because the mood of people will change and they don’t have go back to work.
On the other hand, government can set legislate that every organization should have an obligatory sport day that its members playing their favorite sport game. This makes reduce the stress in members of staff because of challenging in their work and get piece of mind. In addition, when a company provide such facility, their workers ensure the company have a good attention to them. Thus, they try their performance get better and all do best to provide the task of company. When you don’t have enough time off you cannot have perfect concentration on your work and this makes a bad effect on your performance.
In conclusion, in every country you have to have enough weekend day to relax, recharge, and spend your time with your family that leads to more focus and performance at work and better outcome.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: I is a common American expression, in British English it is more common to use: I
Suggestion: I
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...makes a bad effect on your performance. In conclusion, in every country you have...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, hence, so, thus, while, for instance, in addition, in conclusion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 13.1623246493 38% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 10.4138276553 134% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 39.0 24.0651302605 162% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 46.0 41.998997996 110% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 8.3376753507 144% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1427.0 1615.20841683 88% => OK
No of words: 304.0 315.596192385 96% => OK
Chars per words: 4.69407894737 5.12529762239 92% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.17559525986 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.32792266708 2.80592935109 83% => OK
Unique words: 155.0 176.041082164 88% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.509868421053 0.561755894193 91% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 441.0 506.74238477 87% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 0.809619238477 371% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 31.51522146 49.4020404114 64% => OK
Chars per sentence: 101.928571429 106.682146367 96% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.7142857143 20.7667163134 105% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.21428571429 7.06120827912 102% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.277309991844 0.244688304435 113% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.101657052254 0.084324248473 121% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0776069084819 0.0667982634062 116% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.187681686601 0.151304729494 124% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0521172905529 0.056905535591 92% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.5 13.0946893788 88% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 58.62 50.2224549098 117% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.92 12.4159519038 80% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.28 8.58950901804 85% => OK
difficult_words: 50.0 78.4519038076 64% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.