Many manufactured food and drink products contain high levels of sugar, which causes many health problems. Sugary products should be made more expensive to encourage people to consume less sugar.
Do you agree or disagree?
Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.
Write at least 250 words.
Today, due to mass production, the trading of products with excessive levels of sugar drastically flourish. Along with the boom of such a business, a great number of health issues are induced, which stems from the nature that sugar might have an adverse effect on one’s health status. To combat the phenomenon, there are many suggestions that the price for sugary products should be raised higher, which I strongly advocate to some extent. The essay below will demonstrates the author’s personal perspective.
To begin with, there are two factors for price raise on sugary products. The first is to minimize the consumption of these items, since the majority of sugary food and drinks are purchased at a reasonable cost, which appears affordable even to the more impoverished. For instance, a can of coke costs averagely at under $1; with its low price, the beverage is distributed across households from different financial backgrounds. Another purpose of price increase or taxation on the sugary items is to boost financial resources for governments. While a high tax is introduced to a vast range of sugary items, a monetary sum from taxation will be extracted to national income; given that governments are able to invest into more beneficial sections, including medication. The two given factors might help reduce the risk of health issues like diabetes within each certain quantity of consumed sugar, whilst finances gained from taxation are distributed to medical areas to proceed the combat against severe effects on health.
However, raising to a higher price might not be the optimal choice for tackling the surge of health problems. Accordingly, once price increase is practiced, a severe financial loss will surge, given an enormous amount of profits companies specialised in sugary items can gain annually. The more suitable method is hence to cut down sugar levels within each food and beverage products, meanwhile adding more healthful substitutes such as natural syrups into the product content. This can appropriately meet the demands of health protection, along with avoiding detrimental influences on the economic status of companies producing items high in sugar levels.
In conclusion, from the author’s viewpoint, although the increase of prices for sugar products is recommendable, sugar level reduction can be a more effective alternative for the former method. In the future, as the society develops, there will be less items containing excessive sugar levels to introduce.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
accordingly, but, first, hence, however, if, so, while, as to, for instance, in conclusion, such as, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 13.1623246493 137% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 7.85571142285 153% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 10.4138276553 29% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 7.0 24.0651302605 29% => OK
Preposition: 63.0 41.998997996 150% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2116.0 1615.20841683 131% => OK
No of words: 394.0 315.596192385 125% => OK
Chars per words: 5.37055837563 5.12529762239 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.45527027702 4.20363070211 106% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.80831279131 2.80592935109 100% => OK
Unique words: 222.0 176.041082164 126% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.56345177665 0.561755894193 100% => OK
syllable_count: 668.7 506.74238477 132% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 5.43587174349 18% => OK
Article: 10.0 2.52805611222 396% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 9.0 4.76152304609 189% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 24.0 20.2975951904 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 51.4629721256 49.4020404114 104% => OK
Chars per sentence: 132.25 106.682146367 124% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.625 20.7667163134 119% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.125 7.06120827912 101% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.282981642176 0.244688304435 116% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0931589187975 0.084324248473 110% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.062688646406 0.0667982634062 94% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.192130609052 0.151304729494 127% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0454490092064 0.056905535591 80% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.2 13.0946893788 124% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 38.66 50.2224549098 77% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.8 11.3001002004 122% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.16 12.4159519038 114% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.04 8.58950901804 117% => OK
difficult_words: 130.0 78.4519038076 166% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.1190380762 115% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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