Some people think that the best way to reduce crime is to give longer prison sentences. Others, however, believe there are better alternatives to reduce crime.
Discuss both views and give your own opinion.
In today’s world, people have to face massive problems due to crimes, therefore there are many people who believe that the best way to solve this problem is to spend a longer time in prison. However, others believe it is not only the top priority while there are better solutions to reduce crime. This essay will explore arguments for and against better alternatives in crimes and wider population, before presenting my own opinion on the matter.
Supporters of this argument argue that keeping crime in prison for a long time can reduce problems. From one standpoint, longer prison terms may help to make sure that everyone is treated with their failure regardless of their background. As a result, this longer time support, presumably tends not only to increase the overall educational rate for them but also to gain new knowledge and skills, which helps them be more useful when they are in rehabilitation, which promotes an egalitarian society. Second, living a long time at penal institution would result in a higher supply of highly qualified workers because they are learning new things behind the highest standards, which benefits society in the long run. For example, in VietNam, prisons often offer opportunities for learning and personal development during the sentences.
On the other hand, I suppose that the government and education have an improved role for reducing crimes. To begin with, the government should have stricter regulations to prevent bullying and violence. They are small things but the cause for bigger crime in the future. Nonetheless, educating the public, especially young adolescents, always helps them to understand the rules and disciplines, which help them grow into responsible adults. In addition, public campaigns can also encourage people to care more about each other and live in a more positive environment. It, instead, would be a more viable solution for crime if the resources were focused on supporting behavior and academically inclined.
In conclusion, despite the long-term prison. I believe that the authorities and education are still essential in any nation to deal with crimes. However, the governments and individuals should work together to build a safer and more positive society.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, may, nonetheless, second, so, still, therefore, while, for example, i suppose, in addition, in conclusion, as a result, to begin with, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 10.4138276553 134% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 7.30460921844 151% => OK
Pronoun: 22.0 24.0651302605 91% => OK
Preposition: 46.0 41.998997996 110% => OK
Nominalization: 13.0 8.3376753507 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1888.0 1615.20841683 117% => OK
No of words: 358.0 315.596192385 113% => OK
Chars per words: 5.27374301676 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.34981470047 4.20363070211 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.76822266239 2.80592935109 99% => OK
Unique words: 217.0 176.041082164 123% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.606145251397 0.561755894193 108% => OK
syllable_count: 598.5 506.74238477 118% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 9.0 4.76152304609 189% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 52.2965988957 49.4020404114 106% => OK
Chars per sentence: 111.058823529 106.682146367 104% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.0588235294 20.7667163134 101% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.3529411765 7.06120827912 147% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.190684929654 0.244688304435 78% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0632413889666 0.084324248473 75% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0659892124798 0.0667982634062 99% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.124917643435 0.151304729494 83% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.104425959621 0.056905535591 184% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.9 13.0946893788 106% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 41.7 50.2224549098 83% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.29 12.4159519038 107% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.4 8.58950901804 109% => OK
difficult_words: 107.0 78.4519038076 136% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.