2. What is the best invention of last 100 years, the computer, antibiotics, the airplane, and explain why?
In the Modern era, where everything is readily available to everyone all the time, I feel the invention of the computers marked the revolutionary development towards the world as we see it today.
The computers are now widely used in almost every aspects of life, be it in the field of medicine, machineries, education, astronomy, construction and so on. Even computers can now be used to create and control a living ecosystem for humans. It has made our lives easier by capable of doing almost close to everything that we humans can do.
According to the latest statistics published by the Employment World Council computers have replaced humans from almost 40 percent of the current job demands. Most of the regular chores which includes systematic jobs are now being taken care by computers.
To conclude, over the course of journey from their invention to what we see today, computers have helped a lot to simplify and make our lives easier.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, so, i feel
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 10.5418719212 57% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 6.10837438424 33% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 8.36945812808 36% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 3.0 5.94088669951 50% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 11.0 20.9802955665 52% => OK
Preposition: 24.0 31.9359605911 75% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 5.75862068966 87% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 791.0 1207.87684729 65% => OK
No of words: 160.0 242.827586207 66% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.94375 5.00649968141 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.55655882008 3.92707691288 91% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.74225471784 2.71678728327 101% => OK
Unique words: 104.0 139.433497537 75% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.65 0.580463131201 112% => OK
syllable_count: 257.4 379.143842365 68% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.57093596059 102% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 4.6157635468 43% => OK
Article: 1.0 1.56157635468 64% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.71428571429 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.931034482759 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 3.65517241379 109% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 7.0 12.6551724138 55% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 20.5024630542 107% => OK
Sentence length SD: 38.5290772783 50.4703680194 76% => OK
Chars per sentence: 113.0 104.977214359 108% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.8571428571 20.9669160288 109% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.0 7.25397266985 28% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.33497536946 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 6.9802955665 57% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 2.75862068966 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 2.91625615764 103% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0350488139244 0.242375264174 14% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.015535239705 0.0925447433944 17% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0265822148814 0.071462118173 37% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0271866694837 0.151781067708 18% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0303283891526 0.0609392437508 50% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.3 12.6369458128 105% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.15 53.1260098522 93% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.54236453202 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 10.9458128079 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.67 11.5310837438 101% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.07 8.32886699507 109% => OK
difficult_words: 44.0 55.0591133005 80% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.94827586207 121% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.3980295567 104% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.5123152709 114% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Minimum 200 words wanted.
It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.
Rates: 11.1111111111 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 10.0 Out of 90
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