4. Nowadays TV has become an essential part of life. Medium to spread news & awareness and for some, it acts as a companion. What is your opinion about this?
Television has become an essential part of one’s life, and is one of the most influential inventions in the history of mankind. TV will not only entertain people and also make them aware of their surroundings and also acts as a medium to spread news, but for many it has become more than a source of entertainment to their daily companion.
Television acts as an unlimited source of entertainment, news, knowledge and advertisements showing aspects of our lives. Channels feature content involving nature, science, culture, and history along with other entertainment programs. With their cognitive learning programs, they broaden the horizon of people especially students. A research states that children learn better with visual effects and television can act as good medium for such education.
In addition news channels keep you updated with current happenings and events from around the globe. People can know about Syria’s civil war, watch the live update of American Presidential election or where NYSE closed today. For example, it provides weather report on a daily basis which helps people plan their day accordingly.
The scenarios have changed now and people have become more obsessed with television and the contents than simply gathering the required knowledge from it. Situations are such that television has become a lifeline to many where they need to be front it from the moment they wake up to at times staying up all nights for it.
Nowadays, TV has become a need more than a want and is available in every household as part of a basic necessity and it continues its role to influence and educate people but it still won’t be wrong to say that for many it has become a companion. We can very well state that use of such technology depends on a one’sintellect and choice.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 333, Rule ID: A_UNCOUNTABLE[1]
Message: Uncountable nouns are usually not used with an indefinite article. Use simply 'research'.
Suggestion: Research
... horizon of people especially students. A research states that children learn better with ...
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Line 3, column 371, Rule ID: AFFORD_VB[1]
Message: This verb is used with the infinitive: 'to better', 'to well'
Suggestion: to better; to well
.... A research states that children learn better with visual effects and television can ...
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Line 5, column 4, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[2]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: addition,
...s good medium for such education. In addition news channels keep you updated with cur...
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Line 9, column 315, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'an' instead of 'a' if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. 'an article', 'an hour'
Suggestion: an
... that use of such technology depends on a one'sintellect and choice.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
accordingly, also, but, if, so, still, well, for example, in addition
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 10.5418719212 47% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 6.10837438424 98% => OK
Conjunction : 16.0 8.36945812808 191% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 5.94088669951 118% => OK
Pronoun: 24.0 20.9802955665 114% => OK
Preposition: 36.0 31.9359605911 113% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 5.75862068966 122% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1527.0 1207.87684729 126% => OK
No of words: 299.0 242.827586207 123% => OK
Chars per words: 5.10702341137 5.00649968141 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.1583189471 3.92707691288 106% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.87389262934 2.71678728327 106% => OK
Unique words: 175.0 139.433497537 126% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.585284280936 0.580463131201 101% => OK
syllable_count: 475.2 379.143842365 125% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.57093596059 102% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 4.6157635468 65% => OK
Article: 2.0 1.56157635468 128% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.71428571429 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 3.0 0.931034482759 322% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 3.65517241379 55% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 12.6551724138 103% => OK
Sentence length: 23.0 20.5024630542 112% => OK
Sentence length SD: 45.445591372 50.4703680194 90% => OK
Chars per sentence: 117.461538462 104.977214359 112% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.0 20.9669160288 110% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.30769230769 7.25397266985 73% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.12807881773 121% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.33497536946 75% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 6.9802955665 100% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 2.75862068966 109% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 2.91625615764 103% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.208227021632 0.242375264174 86% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0659473779999 0.0925447433944 71% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0659041149399 0.071462118173 92% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.11591434502 0.151781067708 76% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0882998167237 0.0609392437508 145% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.1 12.6369458128 112% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 48.13 53.1260098522 91% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.54236453202 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 10.9458128079 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.65 11.5310837438 110% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.0 8.32886699507 108% => OK
difficult_words: 80.0 55.0591133005 145% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.94827586207 116% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.3980295567 108% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.5123152709 114% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 85.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 76.5 Out of 90
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