With the advent of Internet age, increasing number of workers are doing their jobs from home and communicating with their office through Internet. Known as telecommuting, this trend is expected to catch up with most office workers in the coming decades. How is the trend likely to impact society and the way we live and work?
Internet is rapidly changing the traditional way of work and its corresponding impacts have sparked a heated debate. While some people think that telecommunication has made life much easier, reliable and convenient, others maintain that internet technology adversely impacting the society and the way we use to live and work. I am inclined to think that the benefits of working at home using internet are vast and rich, and i will analyze that throughout this essay.
To begin with, the fundamental concept of internet is to provide people income and knowledge at a very low cost. Due to the advent of internet, a person can get knowledge at home, and also make money, which is crucial to survive in the current era. In addition, people are able to work at home, while taking care of their family, and handling other important matters. For instance, researchers predicted that within next few decades telecommunication will be an essential element of a person life. According to my own experience, when I was a university student, I used internet daily for diverse purposes including, communication, studying, research, etc.
For a social standpoint, some demographics think that internet has been negatively impacted people social life, because they are spending most of their time front of a computer. These people have underestimated the benefits of internet, because they think internet is degrading people relationship. As a tangible example, some scientist research undertaken by a MIT university has asserted that the benefits in a person social life are correlated with the social life through internet.
To conclude, while there are several compelling arguments on both sides, I profoundly believe that the internet has provided lots of people opportunity and a happy life.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, if, so, while, for instance, in addition, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 10.5418719212 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 6.10837438424 49% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 8.36945812808 119% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 5.94088669951 168% => OK
Pronoun: 22.0 20.9802955665 105% => OK
Preposition: 33.0 31.9359605911 103% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 5.75862068966 104% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1503.0 1207.87684729 124% => OK
No of words: 285.0 242.827586207 117% => OK
Chars per words: 5.27368421053 5.00649968141 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.10876417139 3.92707691288 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.01970546812 2.71678728327 111% => OK
Unique words: 169.0 139.433497537 121% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.59298245614 0.580463131201 102% => OK
syllable_count: 489.6 379.143842365 129% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.57093596059 108% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 4.6157635468 87% => OK
Article: 2.0 1.56157635468 128% => OK
Subordination: 7.0 1.71428571429 408% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 3.0 0.931034482759 322% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 3.65517241379 109% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 12.6551724138 95% => OK
Sentence length: 23.0 20.5024630542 112% => OK
Sentence length SD: 30.3021818063 50.4703680194 60% => OK
Chars per sentence: 125.25 104.977214359 119% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.75 20.9669160288 113% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.08333333333 7.25397266985 70% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.33497536946 75% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 6.9802955665 72% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 2.75862068966 72% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 2.91625615764 171% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.161299594405 0.242375264174 67% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0636441057038 0.0925447433944 69% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0326874911567 0.071462118173 46% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.092918593403 0.151781067708 61% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0377555360884 0.0609392437508 62% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.3 12.6369458128 121% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 39.67 53.1260098522 75% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.54236453202 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.4 10.9458128079 122% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.58 11.5310837438 118% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.43 8.32886699507 113% => OK
difficult_words: 84.0 55.0591133005 153% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.94827586207 111% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.3980295567 108% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.5123152709 133% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 77.7777777778 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 70.0 Out of 90
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