Most people in what are known as the developed nations have homes full of gadgets and labor-saving devices, from vacuum cleaners and dishwashers to the latest in computer technology. Some people claim that despite all these labor-saving devices, we seem to have less free time.
In your opinion, has technology improved the quality of life or made it more complicated? Support your arguments with reasons and/or examples from your own experience and observations.
Technology has made human life better or worse is becoming a popular question among many demographics. In developed nations people do not have leisure time despite their houses are full of advance technologies. This essay will discuss that technology has improved human life in some aspects.
To begin with the main purpose of new technology is to make human life easier. Many people around the world think that technology does not offer free time. These criticisms can be valid in certain cases. For example, research done by Oxford University suggested that many people including doctors and engineers do not have much of leisure time in their life, because of their sophisticated jobs. Thus, the fact that technology can help to improve quality of life in some cases but it cannot give free time.
On the other hand, various technology have helped human to save time on daily basic such as, computers, dishwashers, vacuum cleaners, etc. I think that as the World is changing rapidly, which results in the increment of workload for humans. For instance, before the advent of computers, people worked eight hours a day to do calculation on papers. In contrary, nowadays, people are still working eight hours a day to do the same thing with the help of computers. Thus computers can make human jobs easier, but it certainly not gives them free time.
In conclusion, gadgets improved human life is still remain unsolved. In my opinion, machines can help to improve certain people life, but not every person on Earth.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, so, still, thus, for example, for instance, i think, in conclusion, such as, in my opinion, in some cases, to begin with, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 10.5418719212 66% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 6.10837438424 98% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 8.36945812808 60% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 6.0 5.94088669951 101% => OK
Pronoun: 15.0 20.9802955665 71% => OK
Preposition: 35.0 31.9359605911 110% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 5.75862068966 87% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1267.0 1207.87684729 105% => OK
No of words: 254.0 242.827586207 105% => OK
Chars per words: 4.98818897638 5.00649968141 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.99216450694 3.92707691288 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.5336503979 2.71678728327 93% => OK
Unique words: 148.0 139.433497537 106% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.582677165354 0.580463131201 100% => OK
syllable_count: 402.3 379.143842365 106% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.57093596059 102% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 4.6157635468 65% => OK
Article: 1.0 1.56157635468 64% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.71428571429 117% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.931034482759 215% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 8.0 3.65517241379 219% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 12.6551724138 119% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.5024630542 78% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 32.3045232471 50.4703680194 64% => OK
Chars per sentence: 84.4666666667 104.977214359 80% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.9333333333 20.9669160288 81% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.86666666667 7.25397266985 136% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.33497536946 56% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 6.9802955665 143% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 2.75862068966 72% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 2.91625615764 103% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.119105113043 0.242375264174 49% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0436246896352 0.0925447433944 47% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0450477475268 0.071462118173 63% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.078033226093 0.151781067708 51% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0231703282469 0.0609392437508 38% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.5 12.6369458128 83% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 55.24 53.1260098522 104% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.54236453202 47% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 10.9458128079 87% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.37 11.5310837438 99% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.35 8.32886699507 100% => OK
difficult_words: 63.0 55.0591133005 114% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.94827586207 70% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.3980295567 81% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.5123152709 105% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 75.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 67.5 Out of 90
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