In a cashless society, people use more credit cards, do you think cashless society is realistic and why? What are the advantages and disadvantages?

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In a cashless society, people use more credit cards, do you think cashless society is realistic and why? What are the advantages and disadvantages?

Credit cards have been consumed enormously for the last decades and it virtually has created a phenomenal cashless society. Many people believe the benefits of being cashless, while others disagree due to various disadvantages.
This essay will discuss the reasons why being cashless is beneficial for our well-being and also bestow the favorable and unfavorable factors of this phenomenon.

At some point in the future, cashless society will eventually supersede traditional notes and coins. The modern life has been adopting the exponential growth of the Internet, that leads the heavy dependent on financial convenience and consequently obsolete payment methods will become tedious and even insecure. Every years, for example, many banks and avid technologists invent plethora of payment methodologies to ease and protect individual transactions. As the result of this emerge, being cashless proves to be a realistic plan.

Despite the convenience and security of using credit cards, some people are unfavorable the benefit of being cashless because of economic issues and the inaccessibility to the Internet. Most of third world countries are incredibly weak of Internet connection and heavily rely on notes and coins, hence replacing old payment method would result impractical. According to the last research over 20 third world nations where cashless is being implemented, ninety percent of the countries reported that their economies have plummeted significantly. Consequently, the cashless society is prone to be difficult.

The phenomenon of cashless society is rapidly taking over traditional payment methods due to its advantages. In my opinion, it is only the matter of time before notes and coins will disappear completely and replace with the modern payment methods.

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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 4, column 504, Rule ID: PROVE_PROOF[2]
Message: Did you mean 'proofs' (noun) instead of proves (verb)?
Suggestion: proofs
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, consequently, hence, if, so, third, well, while, for example, in my opinion

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 10.5418719212 161% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 6.10837438424 82% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 8.36945812808 167% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 5.94088669951 50% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 11.0 20.9802955665 52% => OK
Preposition: 30.0 31.9359605911 94% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 5.75862068966 139% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1523.0 1207.87684729 126% => OK
No of words: 269.0 242.827586207 111% => OK
Chars per words: 5.66171003717 5.00649968141 113% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.0498419064 3.92707691288 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.96698993192 2.71678728327 109% => OK
Unique words: 163.0 139.433497537 117% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.60594795539 0.580463131201 104% => OK
syllable_count: 476.1 379.143842365 126% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.57093596059 115% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 4.6157635468 65% => OK
Article: 3.0 1.56157635468 192% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.71428571429 117% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.931034482759 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 3.65517241379 109% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 12.6551724138 103% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.5024630542 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 44.0090092982 50.4703680194 87% => OK
Chars per sentence: 117.153846154 104.977214359 112% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.6923076923 20.9669160288 99% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.23076923077 7.25397266985 86% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.12807881773 121% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.33497536946 19% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 6.9802955665 72% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 2.75862068966 181% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 2.91625615764 103% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.214575903682 0.242375264174 89% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0848410036027 0.0925447433944 92% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.066689818797 0.071462118173 93% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.118083237083 0.151781067708 78% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0465470645205 0.0609392437508 76% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.6 12.6369458128 123% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 34.26 53.1260098522 64% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 6.54236453202 171% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.5 10.9458128079 123% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.55 11.5310837438 135% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.09 8.32886699507 121% => OK
difficult_words: 93.0 55.0591133005 169% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.94827586207 121% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.3980295567 96% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.5123152709 114% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 88.8888888889 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 80.0 Out of 90
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