The claim that animals have rights has been subjected as a matter of debate since the 1970’s. Are zoos helping or hurting our animals? Should zoos be banned?
Animals , humans and plants all together form the ecosystem. Environment is made and maintained with the life cycles of all organisms. Every species and its existence manages the ecological balance . The sustainable influence of animals preservation in zoos has sparked the controversy over the potential impact of this trend over recent years.
At the outset, there are numerous reasons that why animals are more safer in zoos but the most conspicuous one stems from the fact that they are well protected from predators. As an illustration animals are killed , caged and harassed for many human or selfish purposes.As we know, animals are unaware of their needs so they are well taken care of by the authorized people. furthermore, they are kept with particular species to enhance the breeding rate.
Another key justification for upholding this notion that animals are preserved and restricted to boundaries. For instance , animals are totally away from nature and other living creatures. Also they are dominated by humans for selfish motives.In addition humans and animals cannot enjoy the glory of natural creation when they are away from each other. Moreover, every creature demands freedom which is probably missing if animals are kept in restricted areas.
From what has been discussed above,it can be conducted that the impact of animals being preserved in zoos is prominent. Although they are well protected and taken care off, yet they need freedom of life. So therefore, wild animals can have separate cages to make human on safer sides and also all animals should be under supervision of government. Also human efforts can safe many animals and help them grow.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, furthermore, if, moreover, so, therefore, well, for instance, in addition
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 20.0 10.5418719212 190% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 6.10837438424 98% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 8.36945812808 155% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 5.94088669951 101% => OK
Pronoun: 18.0 20.9802955665 86% => OK
Preposition: 34.0 31.9359605911 106% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 5.75862068966 208% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1413.0 1207.87684729 117% => OK
No of words: 269.0 242.827586207 111% => OK
Chars per words: 5.25278810409 5.00649968141 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.0498419064 3.92707691288 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.63413009061 2.71678728327 97% => OK
Unique words: 160.0 139.433497537 115% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.594795539033 0.580463131201 102% => OK
syllable_count: 454.5 379.143842365 120% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.57093596059 108% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 4.6157635468 43% => OK
Article: 1.0 1.56157635468 64% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 1.71428571429 175% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.931034482759 107% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 3.65517241379 82% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 12.6551724138 119% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.5024630542 83% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 43.2167662938 50.4703680194 86% => OK
Chars per sentence: 94.2 104.977214359 90% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.9333333333 20.9669160288 86% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.6 7.25397266985 77% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 13.0 5.33497536946 244% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 6.9802955665 86% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 2.75862068966 109% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 2.91625615764 206% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.220579209781 0.242375264174 91% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0758841473564 0.0925447433944 82% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0630975872526 0.071462118173 88% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.139540206929 0.151781067708 92% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0591840047757 0.0609392437508 97% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.3 12.6369458128 97% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 45.76 53.1260098522 86% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.54236453202 47% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 10.9458128079 101% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.87 11.5310837438 112% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.94 8.32886699507 107% => OK
difficult_words: 76.0 55.0591133005 138% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.94827586207 85% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.3980295567 85% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.5123152709 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 72.2222222222 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 65.0 Out of 90
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