A competitive environment in school and university would bring excellence and need to be encouraged. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

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A competitive environment in school and university would bring excellence and need to be encouraged. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

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human behavior is bound with their natural instinct and feelings to others. however, some people think that human behavior can amend by imposing ample of laws and regimes,times New Roman";mso-bidi-font-family:Calibri; mso-bidi-theme-font:minor-latin;color:#B45F06;background:white"> times New Roman";mso-bidi-font-family:Calibri; mso-bidi-theme-font:minor-latin;color:#F6B26B;background:white">while others argue that behavior cannot be changed using limited laws and regulations.times New Roman";mso-bidi-font-family:Calibri; mso-bidi-theme-font:minor-latin;color:blue;background:white"> I am inclined to believe that law only helps to prevent crime and culprit activities in the human hood, but it is agreed to say that it cannot change human thinking and behavior at certain times.times New Roman"; mso-bidi-font-family:Calibri;mso-bidi-theme-font:minor-latin;color:#CC0000; background:white"> The following paragraphs will analyse the inevitable reasons, and thus will lead to a logical conclusion.

human behavior is bound with their natural instinct and feelings to others. however, some people think that human behavior can amend by imposing ample of laws and regimes,times New Roman";mso-bidi-font-family:Calibri; mso-bidi-theme-font:minor-latin;color:#B45F06;background:white"> times New Roman";mso-bidi-font-family:Calibri; mso-bidi-theme-font:minor-latin;color:#F6B26B;background:white">while others argue that behavior cannot be changed using limited laws and regulations.times New Roman";mso-bidi-font-family:Calibri; mso-bidi-theme-font:minor-latin;color:blue;background:white"> I am inclined to believe that law only helps to prevent crime and culprit activities in the human hood, but it is agreed to say that it cannot change human thinking and behavior at certain times.times New Roman"; mso-bidi-font-family:Calibri;mso-bidi-theme-font:minor-latin;color:#CC0000; background:white"> The following paragraphs will analyse the inevitable reasons, and thus will lead to a logical conclusion.

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Average: 1.1 (1 vote)
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 1, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Human
human behavior is bound with their natural in...
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Suggestion: However
...atural instinct and feelings to others. however, some people think that human behavior ...
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Suggestion: , times
...nd by imposing ample of laws and regimes,times New Roman';mso-bidi-font-family:Ca...
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Line 7, column 1, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Human
...ead to a logical conclusion. human behavior is bound with their natural in...
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Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: However
...atural instinct and feelings to others. however, some people think that human behavior ...
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Line 7, column 171, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , times
...nd by imposing ample of laws and regimes,times New Roman';mso-bidi-font-family:Ca...
^^^^^^
Line 13, column 1, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Human
...ead to a logical conclusion. human behavior is bound with their natural in...
^^^^^
Line 13, column 77, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: However
...atural instinct and feelings to others. however, some people think that human behavior ...
^^^^^^^
Line 13, column 171, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , times
...nd by imposing ample of laws and regimes,times New Roman';mso-bidi-font-family:Ca...
^^^^^^

Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, however, so, thus, while

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 10.5418719212 85% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 15.0 6.10837438424 246% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 21.0 8.36945812808 251% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 12.0 5.94088669951 202% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 24.0 20.9802955665 114% => OK
Preposition: 30.0 31.9359605911 94% => OK
Nominalization: 0.0 5.75862068966 0% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2835.0 1207.87684729 235% => Less number of characters wanted.
No of words: 318.0 242.827586207 131% => OK
Chars per words: 8.91509433962 5.00649968141 178% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.22286093782 3.92707691288 108% => OK
Word Length SD: 14.0552392652 2.71678728327 517% => Word_Length_SD is high.
Unique words: 76.0 139.433497537 55% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.238993710692 0.580463131201 41% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 812.7 379.143842365 214% => syllable counts are too long.
avg_syllables_per_word: 2.6 1.57093596059 166% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 4.6157635468 0% => OK
Article: 0.0 1.56157635468 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.71428571429 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 6.0 0.931034482759 644% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 0.0 3.65517241379 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 6.0 12.6551724138 47% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 53.0 20.5024630542 259% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 445.5 50.4703680194 883% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 472.5 104.977214359 450% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 53.0 20.9669160288 253% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 4.83333333333 7.25397266985 67% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.12807881773 73% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 9.0 5.33497536946 169% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 6.9802955665 86% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 2.75862068966 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 2.91625615764 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0113292878133 0.242375264174 5% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.00577986601292 0.0925447433944 6% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.00577986601292 0.071462118173 8% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0113292878133 0.151781067708 7% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0 0.0609392437508 0% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 47.1 12.6369458128 373% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: -66.92 53.1260098522 -126% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 18.2 6.54236453202 278% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 35.8 10.9458128079 327% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 35.34 11.5310837438 306% => Coleman_liau_index is high.
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.1 8.32886699507 97% => OK
difficult_words: 37.0 55.0591133005 67% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 32.5 9.94827586207 327% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 23.2 10.3980295567 223% => Gunning_fog is high.
text_standard: 36.0 10.5123152709 342% => The average readability is very high. Good job!
What are above readability scores?

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Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.

Rates: 11.1111111111 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 10.0 Out of 90
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