Do you think cardless society is realistic and why? What are the advantages and disadvantages?
Nowadays, people are using card for purchasing than cash due to easy accessibility anywhere. Due the advanced technology the usage has increased everywhere even in a small rural areas it seems. One hand is good to access easily everywhere but at the same some disadvantages also there for card users. Let discuss about in following paragraphs.
Firstly, using a card is very useful in the aspect of easy transactions and withdrawing money from any place within a few minutes. It is very safe rather than withdrawing money from the bank. Recently, there is a lot of theft happening in society while returning home from the bank after the withdrawal. Even if you miss the card easily, you can block the card and protect the money without any inconvenience. Reference number and statement also available by card users which helps for documentation purposes too.
Secondly, using cards will have some problem like extra charges for the transaction and can easily be stolen by anybody and even for any emergency purpose we could not transact money due to network issues. Having cash in the hand is safe and secure anywhere not to get struggle to buy something because, sometimes the ATM will not work will give us trouble.
In the view of arguments, I conclude that both card and cash have pros and cons. The government should take action for unwanted charges for withdraw and transaction will be more benefits for the card users
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, if, second, secondly, so, while
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 10.5418719212 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 6.10837438424 131% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 8.36945812808 119% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 5.94088669951 34% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 8.0 20.9802955665 38% => OK
Preposition: 25.0 31.9359605911 78% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 5.75862068966 122% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1186.0 1207.87684729 98% => OK
No of words: 242.0 242.827586207 100% => OK
Chars per words: 4.90082644628 5.00649968141 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.94415379849 3.92707691288 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.6553244434 2.71678728327 98% => OK
Unique words: 147.0 139.433497537 105% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.607438016529 0.580463131201 105% => OK
syllable_count: 383.4 379.143842365 101% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.57093596059 102% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 4.6157635468 65% => OK
Article: 1.0 1.56157635468 64% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.71428571429 58% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.931034482759 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 3.65517241379 27% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 12.6551724138 103% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.5024630542 88% => OK
Sentence length SD: 39.0335919661 50.4703680194 77% => OK
Chars per sentence: 91.2307692308 104.977214359 87% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.6153846154 20.9669160288 89% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.46153846154 7.25397266985 62% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.33497536946 75% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 6.9802955665 129% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 2.75862068966 109% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 2.91625615764 34% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0335344731845 0.242375264174 14% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0134703753112 0.0925447433944 15% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0258837478685 0.071462118173 36% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.018592156026 0.151781067708 12% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0211659627488 0.0609392437508 35% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.0 12.6369458128 87% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 53.21 53.1260098522 100% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.54236453202 47% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 10.9458128079 94% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.14 11.5310837438 97% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.31 8.32886699507 100% => OK
difficult_words: 58.0 55.0591133005 105% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.94827586207 70% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.3980295567 88% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.5123152709 105% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.
Rates: 11.1111111111 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 10.0 Out of 90
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