Do you think the place where a person grew up helps him/her in accomplishing goals in life? Do you agree or disagree?
In recent decades, there has been considerable debate regarding the place that someone grew up and its impact on the person's accomplishment. I firmly concur with the opinion that the area that humankind grew up does not has any effect on their success because achieving the goals requires efforts and determination.
To begin with, the regions and hometown cannot have any impact on the people achievement because of efforts. From my personal experience, a qualitative analysis was conducted by an eminent sociologist to explore further individuals try and endeavour for reaching the goals.Final results revealed that there is a fairly clear relationship between lots of practices and exercises even though friends and neighbours should be taken into consideration. Thus, people can be fully informed about sufficient evidence of a causal link between the humankind success and their efforts.
Furthermore, a determination has a significant effect and its essential for obtaining the goals rather than just their local place. For instance, a quantitative research was carried out at the Melbourne University concerning the incentives and motivations. Hence, perhaps if the scientific research is significantly correlated with the royal and hope and their willing, the preliminary findings will be closely related to both best results and outcomes.
To recapitulate, according to the preceding discussion, I am inclined to the opinion that the determination and quality of their efforts have a significant influence on the people accomplishment rather than just the regions' effect. Moreover, not only should national institutions develop strategies, but also they should formulate them to assist the people to gain their goals.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion: persons'; person's
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Suggestion: have
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Suggestion: have
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Suggestion: try to
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, furthermore, hence, if, moreover, regarding, so, thus, for instance, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 10.5418719212 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 6.10837438424 98% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 8.36945812808 167% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 5.94088669951 84% => OK
Pronoun: 18.0 20.9802955665 86% => OK
Preposition: 32.0 31.9359605911 100% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 5.75862068966 191% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1468.0 1207.87684729 122% => OK
No of words: 262.0 242.827586207 108% => OK
Chars per words: 5.60305343511 5.00649968141 112% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.02323427807 3.92707691288 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.15249615983 2.71678728327 116% => OK
Unique words: 162.0 139.433497537 116% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.618320610687 0.580463131201 107% => OK
syllable_count: 454.5 379.143842365 120% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.57093596059 108% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 4.6157635468 43% => OK
Article: 5.0 1.56157635468 320% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 0.0 1.71428571429 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.931034482759 107% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 3.65517241379 137% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 12.6551724138 79% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 26.0 20.5024630542 127% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 66.2543583472 50.4703680194 131% => OK
Chars per sentence: 146.8 104.977214359 140% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.2 20.9669160288 125% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.3 7.25397266985 128% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.33497536946 94% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 6.9802955665 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 2.75862068966 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 2.91625615764 69% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0730044299447 0.242375264174 30% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0311535423079 0.0925447433944 34% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0425682055903 0.071462118173 60% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0503772136286 0.151781067708 33% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0536719317931 0.0609392437508 88% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 18.0 12.6369458128 142% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 36.63 53.1260098522 69% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 6.54236453202 171% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.6 10.9458128079 133% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.5 11.5310837438 134% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.17 8.32886699507 122% => OK
difficult_words: 87.0 55.0591133005 158% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 15.0 9.94827586207 151% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 10.3980295567 119% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 10.5123152709 143% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.
Rates: 11.1111111111 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 10.0 Out of 90
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