How widely do you think the problems that people spend too much time on work than their personal life and experience time shortage? What problems will it cause?
Of late, there has been a colossal upsurge among the prodigies discusssing the hindrances faced by people spending excessive time at work places. Some people think that people spending too much time at offices face minimal problems, while others maintain that extra time spent at employment place hampers the personal life of a person. This essay will discuss the impediments faced by people spending excessive time at offices.
At the outset, there are myriad of arguments associated with spending too much time at offices. Firstly, the most conspicuous is the stress factor induced by prolonged and demanding employment environments. Therefore, to meet the working standards, employees work day in and day out and subsequently become prey to stress. For instance, a survey in Times journal has revealed that maximum percentage of people subject to stress are working in highly tensed environment like ATC, military and banking. As a result, it is quite evident that job induced stress is one of biggest problem faced by the employees.
On the other hand, another pivotal facet of this argument is that people for the lust of money and in pursuit of excellence go beyond their physical limitations and consequently become victim to various diseases like sugar and cholesterol. Not only employees involved in prolonged working hours are subject to deadly diseases but also they are unable to spend quality and quantity time with their beloved family members. As a matter of fact, people spending too much time at work place are unable to maintain a balance between work and family.
To recapitulate, foregoing discussion propounds that employees spending prolonged working hours are not only a target to stress and harmful diseases but also are unable to manage their domestic lives efficiently.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, consequently, first, firstly, if, so, therefore, while, for instance, as a matter of fact, as a result, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 10.5418719212 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 6.10837438424 16% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 8.36945812808 143% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 5.94088669951 101% => OK
Pronoun: 13.0 20.9802955665 62% => OK
Preposition: 44.0 31.9359605911 138% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 5.75862068966 122% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1519.0 1207.87684729 126% => OK
No of words: 288.0 242.827586207 119% => OK
Chars per words: 5.27430555556 5.00649968141 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.11953428781 3.92707691288 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.69408422205 2.71678728327 99% => OK
Unique words: 156.0 139.433497537 112% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.541666666667 0.580463131201 93% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 476.1 379.143842365 126% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.57093596059 108% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 4.6157635468 43% => OK
Article: 2.0 1.56157635468 128% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 1.71428571429 175% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.931034482759 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 3.65517241379 137% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 12.6551724138 95% => OK
Sentence length: 24.0 20.5024630542 117% => OK
Sentence length SD: 47.3998212608 50.4703680194 94% => OK
Chars per sentence: 126.583333333 104.977214359 121% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.0 20.9669160288 114% => OK
Discourse Markers: 11.0 7.25397266985 152% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.33497536946 56% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 6.9802955665 57% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 2.75862068966 217% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 2.91625615764 69% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.31116793311 0.242375264174 128% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.117111325205 0.0925447433944 127% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0782003378444 0.071462118173 109% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.177541162688 0.151781067708 117% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0779541995271 0.0609392437508 128% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.4 12.6369458128 122% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 38.66 53.1260098522 73% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.54236453202 47% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.8 10.9458128079 126% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.58 11.5310837438 118% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.49 8.32886699507 114% => OK
difficult_words: 85.0 55.0591133005 154% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.94827586207 106% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.3980295567 112% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.5123152709 133% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 85.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 76.5 Out of 90
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