Imitating celebrities in sports and movies is good or bad
Even though some people believe that sports and movies celebrities' imitation may be bad, others think the opposite. In my opinion, the act of imitation may be good for sports but, it may not be good for movies.
There are some adversities when trying to copy actors or actresses actions. It happens when an young person becomes aggressive towards one of his friends. For example, he watches a film about fighting and tries to follow the same steps as his idol. Therefore, he will be certainly involved in fights which may bring him further drawbacks.
However, it is an excellent idea when one imitates the same steps as his/her athlete idol. By seeing the hard work which the athlete is struggling to overcome, as one example the hindrances that he is likely to face later on, one may be motivated and start to practice sports. Then, in the future, it may become one's way of living.
Finally, an individual can benefit from imitating idols in sport, however it does not apply for films.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 92, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'a' instead of 'an' if the following word doesn't start with a vowel sound, e.g. 'a sentence', 'a university'
Suggestion: a
...s or actresses actions. It happens when an young person becomes aggressive towards...
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Message: Did you mean 'one's'?
Suggestion: one's
...rts. Then, in the future, it may become ones way of living. Finally, an individual ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, finally, however, may, so, then, therefore, for example, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 10.5418719212 85% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 6.10837438424 131% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 8.36945812808 60% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 7.0 5.94088669951 118% => OK
Pronoun: 16.0 20.9802955665 76% => OK
Preposition: 17.0 31.9359605911 53% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 2.0 5.75862068966 35% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 818.0 1207.87684729 68% => OK
No of words: 173.0 242.827586207 71% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.72832369942 5.00649968141 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.62669911048 3.92707691288 92% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.44330275593 2.71678728327 90% => OK
Unique words: 114.0 139.433497537 82% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.658959537572 0.580463131201 114% => OK
syllable_count: 258.3 379.143842365 68% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.57093596059 95% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 4.6157635468 130% => OK
Article: 2.0 1.56157635468 128% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.71428571429 117% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.931034482759 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 3.65517241379 82% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 12.6551724138 79% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 17.0 20.5024630542 83% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 33.0492057393 50.4703680194 65% => OK
Chars per sentence: 81.8 104.977214359 78% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.3 20.9669160288 83% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.5 7.25397266985 103% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.33497536946 37% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 6.9802955665 57% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 2.75862068966 181% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 2.91625615764 34% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.214853666439 0.242375264174 89% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0779695646431 0.0925447433944 84% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.121952752124 0.071462118173 171% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.13859566819 0.151781067708 91% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.158228090678 0.0609392437508 260% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.5 12.6369458128 75% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 62.68 53.1260098522 118% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.54236453202 47% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 10.9458128079 79% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.86 11.5310837438 86% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.31 8.32886699507 100% => OK
difficult_words: 42.0 55.0591133005 76% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 9.94827586207 65% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.3980295567 85% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.5123152709 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 200 words wanted.
Rates: 55.5555555556 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 50.0 Out of 90
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