The importance of music subjects.
The importance of music is an important subject in school which was always debatable has now become more controversial with many people claiming that it is beneficial while other reject this notion. The substantial influence of this trend has sparked the controversy over the potential impact in recent years. In my opinion, the former proposition appears to be more rational. This essay will further elaborate my views for favoring the positive impact of this trend and thus will lead to a logical conclusion.
There are myriad to reasons which will further elaborate this arguments but the most preponderant one stems from the fact that music is as important subjects in school to promote learning in children life. Another pivotal aspect of this trend is that music is important subjects in school because sometimes students are getting bore to read one subjects so music subject is very helpful for people. Needless to say, all these merits stand in a good stead.
Elaborating my viewpoint, there are some more merits but one of the crucial effects is that when student read the music subjects in school it will be very helpful for them they can learn many things in their life which will helpful for them. Besides, it increase their interest to read other subjects. Hence, it is apparent why many are against of this trend.
According to the arguments aforementioned above, one can reach to a conclusion that the benefits of music subject is important in school are indeed too great to ignore.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, but, hence, if, so, thus, while, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 10.5418719212 161% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 6.10837438424 115% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 8.36945812808 36% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 9.0 5.94088669951 151% => OK
Pronoun: 25.0 20.9802955665 119% => OK
Preposition: 32.0 31.9359605911 100% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 5.75862068966 52% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1265.0 1207.87684729 105% => OK
No of words: 252.0 242.827586207 104% => OK
Chars per words: 5.01984126984 5.00649968141 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.98428260373 3.92707691288 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.56424137656 2.71678728327 94% => OK
Unique words: 136.0 139.433497537 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.539682539683 0.580463131201 93% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 386.1 379.143842365 102% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.57093596059 95% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 4.6157635468 65% => OK
Article: 3.0 1.56157635468 192% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.71428571429 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.931034482759 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 3.65517241379 55% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 12.6551724138 87% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.5024630542 107% => OK
Sentence length SD: 66.1881865068 50.4703680194 131% => OK
Chars per sentence: 115.0 104.977214359 110% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.9090909091 20.9669160288 109% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.0 7.25397266985 69% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.33497536946 75% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 6.9802955665 129% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 2.75862068966 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 2.91625615764 69% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.23816741603 0.242375264174 98% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0843060550818 0.0925447433944 91% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.08719315299 0.071462118173 122% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.148734424244 0.151781067708 98% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0464699575655 0.0609392437508 76% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.7 12.6369458128 108% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 57.61 53.1260098522 108% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.54236453202 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 10.9458128079 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.13 11.5310837438 105% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.17 8.32886699507 98% => OK
difficult_words: 55.0 55.0591133005 100% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.94827586207 116% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.3980295567 104% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.5123152709 105% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 77.7777777778 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 70.0 Out of 90
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