Large shopping malls are replacing small shops. What is your opinion on this? Do you think this is a good or bad change?
Of late, there has been a colossal upsurge in the trend to see prodigies debating the large shopping malls around the country replacing the small shops. it can be said that big shops offer variety of benefits to the customer, while on the other hand stands a perspective that they are a challenge to local merchants run out of their business. this essay will elaborate on both sides and will lead to a logical conclusion.
At the outset, there are numerous reasons why shopping malls are a benefit to the society and the most conspicuous one stems from the fact that they provide cheap prices and convenience to the consumers. As an illustration, Westfield is an Australian shopping mall which has the collection of restaurants, apparels, grocery stores and even include children play area under single roof. this is an enormous advantage for the families who need to purchase different items. Therefore, one of the major factors for the success of such shopping malls is the convenience that they provide to the shoppers.
Nevertheless, some people hold an opposing view and tend to believe that spread of malls have a detrimental effect on local economy because of the competition emerged in the market. For this reason, few are opposing the changes brought by this new development.
In light of discussion above, it can be concluded that the impact created by the chain of merchandise and shops are prominent, although the side effects on local community cannot be overlooked.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, look, nevertheless, so, therefore, while, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 10.5418719212 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 6.10837438424 98% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 8.36945812808 72% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 5.94088669951 135% => OK
Pronoun: 16.0 20.9802955665 76% => OK
Preposition: 33.0 31.9359605911 103% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 5.75862068966 104% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1245.0 1207.87684729 103% => OK
No of words: 248.0 242.827586207 102% => OK
Chars per words: 5.02016129032 5.00649968141 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.96837696647 3.92707691288 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.75367210605 2.71678728327 101% => OK
Unique words: 152.0 139.433497537 109% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.612903225806 0.580463131201 106% => OK
syllable_count: 381.6 379.143842365 101% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.57093596059 95% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 4.6157635468 87% => OK
Article: 0.0 1.56157635468 0% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 1.71428571429 175% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.931034482759 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 3.65517241379 82% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 12.6551724138 79% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 20.5024630542 117% => OK
Sentence length SD: 48.242719658 50.4703680194 96% => OK
Chars per sentence: 124.5 104.977214359 119% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.8 20.9669160288 118% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.3 7.25397266985 87% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.33497536946 94% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 6.9802955665 86% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 2.75862068966 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 2.91625615764 137% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.212242759698 0.242375264174 88% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0810161578926 0.0925447433944 88% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.06502501193 0.071462118173 91% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.112141291234 0.151781067708 74% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0555197417469 0.0609392437508 91% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.6 12.6369458128 116% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 55.58 53.1260098522 105% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.54236453202 47% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 10.9458128079 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.13 11.5310837438 105% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.16 8.32886699507 110% => OK
difficult_words: 68.0 55.0591133005 124% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.0 9.94827586207 131% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.3980295567 112% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.5123152709 114% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 80.5555555556 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 72.5 Out of 90
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