Nowadays shops have extended opening hours almost every day of the week in many countries. Is it a positive or negative development for shoppers and local community?
One of the most conspicuous trends of today’s world is colossal upsurge in the number of people believing that nowadays shops have extended opening hours almost every day of the week in many countries. There is a widespread worry that this will only lead to a myriad of concerns in one’s life. However, I do not entirely accept this and I will explain why in this essay.
There are a number of arguments in favour of my stance. The most preponderant one is that opening hours of shops can not only contribute positive or negative development but also lead to numerous other benefits in various fields. Thanks to the wide range of advantages it offers, not only can one benefit more when it comes to being effective , but they can also enhance the productivity and quality of their lives, with much ease, efficacy and convenience. Needless to say, all these merits stand one in good stead, as far as augmenting their chances of prosperity and excellence is concerned.
There are, however, some pitfalls that can easily overwhelm potential benefit of opening hours every day of the week. The primary one stems from the fact by observing the aforementioned trend, people have not only realised its gravity, but also gauged the magnitude of its repercussions when it comes to today’s ever-changing lifestyle. Besides, its impact on positive development for shoppers is far-reaching indeed.
In view of the arguments outlined above, one can conclude that despite some drawbacks, the benefit of opening hours for shops, are indeed too great to ignore.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion: ,
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, however, if, so
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 10.5418719212 85% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 6.10837438424 115% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 8.36945812808 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 5.94088669951 118% => OK
Pronoun: 21.0 20.9802955665 100% => OK
Preposition: 37.0 31.9359605911 116% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 5.75862068966 87% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1312.0 1207.87684729 109% => OK
No of words: 259.0 242.827586207 107% => OK
Chars per words: 5.06563706564 5.00649968141 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.01166760082 3.92707691288 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.80520437716 2.71678728327 103% => OK
Unique words: 150.0 139.433497537 108% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.579150579151 0.580463131201 100% => OK
syllable_count: 421.2 379.143842365 111% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.57093596059 102% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 4.6157635468 43% => OK
Article: 3.0 1.56157635468 192% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.71428571429 58% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.931034482759 215% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 3.65517241379 55% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 12.6551724138 87% => OK
Sentence length: 23.0 20.5024630542 112% => OK
Sentence length SD: 58.4842989454 50.4703680194 116% => OK
Chars per sentence: 119.272727273 104.977214359 114% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.5454545455 20.9669160288 112% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.18181818182 7.25397266985 44% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.33497536946 19% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 6.9802955665 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 2.75862068966 72% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 2.91625615764 34% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.267736887539 0.242375264174 110% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0954793170985 0.0925447433944 103% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.121876942484 0.071462118173 171% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.148357901526 0.151781067708 98% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0657168881653 0.0609392437508 108% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.2 12.6369458128 112% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 48.13 53.1260098522 91% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.54236453202 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 10.9458128079 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.42 11.5310837438 108% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.04 8.32886699507 109% => OK
difficult_words: 70.0 55.0591133005 127% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.94827586207 106% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.3980295567 108% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.5123152709 105% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 77.7777777778 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 70.0 Out of 90
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