some people believe that the design of buildings has an impact on people To what extent do you agree or disagree

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some people believe that the design of buildings has an impact on people. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

The importance of design of buildings which was always contentious has now become more controversial with many people claiming that it is beneficial which others reject this notion. The substantial influence of design of building has sparked the controversy over the potential impact of this trend in recent years. In my opinion, the proposition appears to be more rational, and this essay will further elaborate my reason for favouring the positive and negative effects of this trend and thus will lead to a logical conclusion.

There are ample of fruitful reasons which will further explains this argument, but the most preponderant one stems from the fact that nowadays, designs of buildings play a crucial role in our life. Because, architectures are using new techniques in made of buildings as compared to last decades. Also, they are educated and experiences than older designer. As an illustration, most of the people made house with the help of experience architecture. Moreover, people always feel proud when they made house with latest design. As a result, its need of 21th century.

However, there are some pitfalls that negate this argument and which can certainly overwhelm the potential influence of vehicles, but the most alarming one is rooted in the fact that it is waste of money and time. Because, builders earn lot of money from house owners because they always make expensive designs as well as it is just way of show off.

According to the arguments aforementioned above, one can reach a conclusion that the benefits of vehicles like cars and aeroplanes are instrumental indeed, however its potential drawbacks should not be overlooked either.

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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 506, Rule ID: THE_SUPERLATIVE[2]
Message: A determiner is probably missing here: 'with the latest'.
Suggestion: with the latest
... always feel proud when they made house with latest design. As a result, its need of 21th c...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, look, moreover, so, thus, well, as a result, as well as, in my opinion

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 10.5418719212 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 6.10837438424 115% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 8.36945812808 108% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 5.94088669951 168% => OK
Pronoun: 22.0 20.9802955665 105% => OK
Preposition: 35.0 31.9359605911 110% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 5.75862068966 139% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1407.0 1207.87684729 116% => OK
No of words: 271.0 242.827586207 112% => OK
Chars per words: 5.19188191882 5.00649968141 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.05734859645 3.92707691288 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.80397160784 2.71678728327 103% => OK
Unique words: 161.0 139.433497537 115% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.594095940959 0.580463131201 102% => OK
syllable_count: 436.5 379.143842365 115% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.57093596059 102% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 4.6157635468 43% => OK
Article: 3.0 1.56157635468 192% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.71428571429 117% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 0.931034482759 322% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 3.65517241379 55% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 12.6551724138 95% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.5024630542 107% => OK
Sentence length SD: 62.7764994953 50.4703680194 124% => OK
Chars per sentence: 117.25 104.977214359 112% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.5833333333 20.9669160288 108% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.83333333333 7.25397266985 108% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.33497536946 19% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 6.9802955665 100% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 2.75862068966 72% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 2.91625615764 103% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.124725751557 0.242375264174 51% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0470017996651 0.0925447433944 51% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0422968882908 0.071462118173 59% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0630979175124 0.151781067708 42% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0443803981168 0.0609392437508 73% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.3 12.6369458128 113% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.15 53.1260098522 93% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.54236453202 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 10.9458128079 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.12 11.5310837438 114% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.51 8.32886699507 114% => OK
difficult_words: 82.0 55.0591133005 149% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 9.94827586207 141% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.3980295567 104% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.5123152709 133% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 85.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 76.5 Out of 90
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