The world’s governments and organizations are facing a lot of issues. Which do you think is the most pressing problem for the inhabitants on our planet and give the solution?
In today's world where there are lots of issues to deal with which will affect our planet habitat out of which the most common issue is rising pollution on our planet. In recent years the air quality has been degraded to a great extent and also due to rise in pollution we have seen varying climatic changes which has cause disturbance around the globe. We will discuss more on this problem that world's governments need to address and solution that they might help to resolve this.
As the increase of pollution has led to the greenhouse effect that led to the rise in the average temperature of the earth causing the earth to be more warmer than before has affected human to a greater extent. It is necessary for the world's governments to educate people about such changes happening due to the pollution. This will help people to understand and come up with the solution that will help the government to come up with a better solution to suppress problem like pollution.
Furthermore, world's government need to come up with regulation to control pollution by setting up standards that will not allow any machine to emit harmful gases. This will led better control over pollution. Also, governments should take initiative to promote planting plants and educate people about its advantage to curb greenhouse effects that will help to maintain equilibrium temperature suitable for humans on this planet.
To conclude, an issue like pollution being a most pressing issue that is of great concern and needs to be addressed by world's government. This can be solved collaboratively if people are educated with this concerns and its side effect alongside setting pollution related regulation while promoting plantings plants that will fight to curb pollution issues.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 1, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “As” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...hat they might help to resolve this. As the increase of pollution has led to th...
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Line 3, column 148, Rule ID: MOST_COMPARATIVE[2]
Message: Use only 'warmer' (without 'more') when you use the comparative.
Suggestion: warmer
...re of the earth causing the earth to be more warmer than before has affected human to a gre...
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Line 5, column 174, Rule ID: DID_BASEFORM[1]
Message: The verb 'will' requires the base form of the verb: 'lead'
Suggestion: lead
...achine to emit harmful gases. This will led better control over pollution. Also, go...
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Line 7, column 120, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[2]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'worlds'' or 'world's'?
Suggestion: worlds'; world's
...at concern and needs to be addressed by worlds government. This can be solved collabor...
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Message: Did you mean 'these'?
Suggestion: these
...aboratively if people are educated with this concerns and its side effect alongside ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, furthermore, if, so, while, to a great extent
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 10.5418719212 95% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 6.10837438424 213% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 6.0 8.36945812808 72% => OK
Relative clauses : 12.0 5.94088669951 202% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 23.0 20.9802955665 110% => OK
Preposition: 54.0 31.9359605911 169% => OK
Nominalization: 19.0 5.75862068966 330% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1475.0 1207.87684729 122% => OK
No of words: 293.0 242.827586207 121% => OK
Chars per words: 5.03412969283 5.00649968141 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.13729897018 3.92707691288 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.61525215806 2.71678728327 96% => OK
Unique words: 151.0 139.433497537 108% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.515358361775 0.580463131201 89% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 451.8 379.143842365 119% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.57093596059 95% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 4.6157635468 108% => OK
Article: 1.0 1.56157635468 64% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.71428571429 58% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.931034482759 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 3.65517241379 82% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 12.6551724138 87% => OK
Sentence length: 26.0 20.5024630542 127% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 50.0985805048 50.4703680194 99% => OK
Chars per sentence: 134.090909091 104.977214359 128% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.6363636364 20.9669160288 127% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.63636363636 7.25397266985 64% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.33497536946 94% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 6.9802955665 100% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 2.75862068966 72% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 2.91625615764 69% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.172363828422 0.242375264174 71% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0719555292748 0.0925447433944 78% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0642151662803 0.071462118173 90% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.11174570412 0.151781067708 74% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0593716867092 0.0609392437508 97% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.6 12.6369458128 123% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 53.55 53.1260098522 101% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.54236453202 47% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 10.9458128079 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.19 11.5310837438 106% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.59 8.32886699507 103% => OK
difficult_words: 68.0 55.0591133005 124% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.5 9.94827586207 126% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 10.3980295567 119% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.5123152709 124% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 80.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 72.0 Out of 90
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.