Some people prefer to listen to music while studying, as music has a calming effect on the mind. Others prefer a pin drop silence in order to concentrate on the content they are studying and have an undivided attention while they do so.Which option works

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Some people prefer to listen to music while studying, as music has a calming effect on the mind. Others prefer a pin drop silence in order to concentrate on the content they are studying and have an undivided attention while they do so.

Which option works better for you and why do you think the other option is not viable to ensure a successful study time?

These days, there is ongoing debate between people about that listening the music while studying or not. While it is possible to claim that people enjoy music while doing any task whether it is studying or showering. However, in this essay I will explain my point of view by analyzing both sides of the argument.

There are several reasons why people thought that it beneficial listening the music while studying, normally doing memorizing tasks. Brain stores that information quickly which have some emotions attached. Fetching of emotional information from brain is also quick and robust. By listening of the music we are actually attaching emotions with it. So, it will be easy to memorize the task with music.

Those who argue for music should not be listened while studying have a different view and say that it can actually be a good thing. Firstly, it is claimed that while brainstorming or some research activity it is better to focus on one task at a time. However, music can be listened to fresh the mind after completing the activity. By doing task sequentially mind will not be disturbed. It happens that while doing parallel tasks people feel tired. This is the reason of multi-tasking which is not good for the health.

While there are strong arguments on both sides of the case, my personal opinion is that i will not prefer multi-tasking rather complete each task separately. In addition to it, there should be a time to relax and enjoy, so in separate time one can listen to the music. By combining both things will consume more time and energy to complete each activity.

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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion: opinion
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, also, first, firstly, however, if, so, while, in addition

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 10.5418719212 171% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 6.10837438424 164% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 8.36945812808 84% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 5.94088669951 185% => OK
Pronoun: 27.0 20.9802955665 129% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 29.0 31.9359605911 91% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 5.75862068966 69% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1325.0 1207.87684729 110% => OK
No of words: 273.0 242.827586207 112% => OK
Chars per words: 4.85347985348 5.00649968141 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.06481385082 3.92707691288 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.53480912149 2.71678728327 93% => OK
Unique words: 141.0 139.433497537 101% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.516483516484 0.580463131201 89% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 415.8 379.143842365 110% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.57093596059 95% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 4.6157635468 152% => OK
Article: 0.0 1.56157635468 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.71428571429 117% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.931034482759 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 3.65517241379 137% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 12.6551724138 134% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.5024630542 78% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 29.7277147494 50.4703680194 59% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 77.9411764706 104.977214359 74% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.0588235294 20.9669160288 77% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.94117647059 7.25397266985 54% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.33497536946 37% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 6.9802955665 158% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 2.75862068966 109% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 2.91625615764 103% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.273524904871 0.242375264174 113% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0958644952688 0.0925447433944 104% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0681152405404 0.071462118173 95% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.177056448608 0.151781067708 117% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0498977155367 0.0609392437508 82% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.4 12.6369458128 74% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 63.7 53.1260098522 120% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.54236453202 47% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.4 10.9458128079 77% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.55 11.5310837438 91% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.61 8.32886699507 91% => OK
difficult_words: 55.0 55.0591133005 100% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.94827586207 70% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.3980295567 81% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.5123152709 76% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 55.5555555556 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 50.0 Out of 90
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