Technology access to online music should be free or paid. What do you think?
Surely there has been no time in history where the lives of people have changed more dramatically. A quick reflection on typical day reveals that in the recent time technology has access to online music should be free or paid has been one of the prominent topics in the contemporary discussion. People have always been intrigued to analyze and explain this nation. I would like say that given my viewpoint is aforementioned statement before arriving at a logical conclusion.
To begin with, due to advancement technology there has been colossal upsurge in the trend. There are many arguments which could be attributes toward making the music available online for paid. It is the help many struggling singers and composers to learn from recorded music.
On the other hand technology has provided the free online music lose the popularity and market value. Furthermore people take free sources as granted and shoe the adequate respect to composers. One of the major drawbacks the online music available the free in income resource will be stop.
Before putting my pen down I would like to analyze the aforementioned statement. According to me online music should be paid due to earn resource and people use to limit the online sources.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 102, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Furthermore,
...c lose the popularity and market value. Furthermore people take free sources as granted and...
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Line 3, column 290, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “Before” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...e free in income resource will be stop. Before putting my pen down I would like to ana...
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Line 4, column 81, Rule ID: ACCORDING_TO_ME[1]
Message: This phrase can sound awkward in English. Consider using 'in my opinion' or 'I think'.
Suggestion: In my opinion; I think
...o analyze the aforementioned statement. According to me online music should be paid due to earn...
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Line 4, column 157, Rule ID: USE_TO_VERB[1]
Message: Did you mean 'used'?
Suggestion: used
...be paid due to earn resource and people use to limit the online sources.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, furthermore, so, to begin with, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 10.5418719212 104% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 6.10837438424 98% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 8.36945812808 72% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 5.94088669951 67% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 9.0 20.9802955665 43% => OK
Preposition: 29.0 31.9359605911 91% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 5.75862068966 69% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1034.0 1207.87684729 86% => OK
No of words: 205.0 242.827586207 84% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.04390243902 5.00649968141 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.78388967377 3.92707691288 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.71130885678 2.71678728327 100% => OK
Unique words: 122.0 139.433497537 87% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.59512195122 0.580463131201 103% => OK
syllable_count: 340.2 379.143842365 90% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.57093596059 108% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 4.6157635468 43% => OK
Article: 1.0 1.56157635468 64% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.71428571429 58% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.931034482759 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 3.65517241379 109% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 12.6551724138 95% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.5024630542 83% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 30.3272658767 50.4703680194 60% => OK
Chars per sentence: 86.1666666667 104.977214359 82% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.0833333333 20.9669160288 81% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.5 7.25397266985 62% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.33497536946 75% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 6.9802955665 100% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 2.75862068966 72% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 2.91625615764 103% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.340235787372 0.242375264174 140% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.114690965465 0.0925447433944 124% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.117840282703 0.071462118173 165% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.203947706248 0.151781067708 134% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0312007185676 0.0609392437508 51% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.8 12.6369458128 85% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 45.76 53.1260098522 86% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.54236453202 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 10.9458128079 101% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.66 11.5310837438 101% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.33 8.32886699507 100% => OK
difficult_words: 50.0 55.0591133005 91% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.94827586207 85% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.3980295567 85% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.5123152709 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 55.5555555556 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 50.0 Out of 90
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.