What are the advantages and disadvantages of cashless society? Discuss.

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What are the advantages and disadvantages of cashless society? Discuss.

Cashless society is a society in which electronic or plastic money is used instead of cash or notes. Nowadays ample of people fascinate the trend of debit and credit cards as these are more convenient, easily accessible and could be carried comfortably. Though, every technology has some benefits and drawbacks which will be enlightened further.
To commence, there is no ambiguity to say that money used in the form of cards is completely reliable as one does not have to carry a bulk of cash which is not only difficult to carry but there is the risk of theft also. In addition, an individual can easily block the card by going to nearby branch of bank or may block it through online process also. Furthermore, in the case of shortage of money, a person can derive the advantage of credit card to buy necessities as he does not have to pay the bank right away.
On the flip side, there are some drawbacks associated with it as it is quite difficult for an illiterate person to operate. Consequently, hackers may also transact a bucket load of money by hacking the account of an affluent man who has earned it through his rigorous and blood-sweating hard work. Not to forget, bafflement may also induce among people due to dysfunction or malfunctioning while doing online transactions, therefore creating an environment of turmoil among them.
To conclude, to avoid these kind of hassles, government should create robust systems for the online transactions and also should organize some campaigns through which they aware the general public about the potential risks connected with it. In the end, proper guidance should be provided by bank staff and people to less educated people, so that they do not face any problem while using plastic money.

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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 216, Rule ID: ALSO_SENT_END[1]
Message: 'Also' is not used at the end of the sentence. Use 'as well' instead.
Suggestion: as well
...to carry but there is the risk of theft also. In addition, an individual can easily ...
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Line 2, column 347, Rule ID: ALSO_SENT_END[1]
Message: 'Also' is not used at the end of the sentence. Use 'as well' instead.
Suggestion: as well
... or may block it through online process also. Furthermore, in the case of shortage o...
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Line 4, column 23, Rule ID: THIS_NNS[2]
Message: Did you mean 'this kind' or 'these kinds'?
Suggestion: this kind; these kinds
...moil among them. To conclude, to avoid these kind of hassles, government should create ro...
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Line 4, column 183, Rule ID: GENERAL_XX[1]
Message: Use simply 'public'.
Suggestion: public
... campaigns through which they aware the general public about the potential risks connected wit...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, consequently, furthermore, if, may, so, therefore, while, in addition, kind of

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 10.5418719212 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 6.10837438424 164% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 8.36945812808 131% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 5.94088669951 118% => OK
Pronoun: 14.0 20.9802955665 67% => OK
Preposition: 44.0 31.9359605911 138% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 5.75862068966 122% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1455.0 1207.87684729 120% => OK
No of words: 298.0 242.827586207 123% => OK
Chars per words: 4.88255033557 5.00649968141 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.15483772266 3.92707691288 106% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.71263220815 2.71678728327 100% => OK
Unique words: 174.0 139.433497537 125% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.58389261745 0.580463131201 101% => OK
syllable_count: 458.1 379.143842365 121% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.57093596059 95% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 4.6157635468 0% => OK
Article: 2.0 1.56157635468 128% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.71428571429 58% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.931034482759 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 3.65517241379 192% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 12.6551724138 87% => OK
Sentence length: 27.0 20.5024630542 132% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 44.0542490516 50.4703680194 87% => OK
Chars per sentence: 132.272727273 104.977214359 126% => OK
Words per sentence: 27.0909090909 20.9669160288 129% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.09090909091 7.25397266985 112% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.33497536946 75% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 6.9802955665 72% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 2.75862068966 181% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 2.91625615764 34% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0486733165961 0.242375264174 20% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.023562123665 0.0925447433944 25% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0603798448265 0.071462118173 84% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0320151699401 0.151781067708 21% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0427130102896 0.0609392437508 70% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.1 12.6369458128 119% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 52.53 53.1260098522 99% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.54236453202 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.6 10.9458128079 115% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.32 11.5310837438 98% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.0 8.32886699507 108% => OK
difficult_words: 76.0 55.0591133005 138% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 9.94827586207 146% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.8 10.3980295567 123% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.5123152709 124% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.

Rates: 11.1111111111 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 10.0 Out of 90
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