What is the best invention of last 100 years?and explain why?

Essay topics:

What is the best invention of last 100 years?and explain why?

Recently, the phenomenon of best invention and its corresponding impact has sparked a heated debate. Although contested by many that new invention is highly beneficial, such issue is regarded thoroughly both constructive and positive by a substantial number of individuals. I am inclined to believe that computer can be a plus, and I will analyze that throughout this essay.
From patent standpoint, mobile can provide the society with some noticeable effects which are rooted in the fact that the invention, as well as designing, are inextricably bound up. According to my own experience, when I was a university student, I performed an academic experiment which discovered processing. Thus, beneficial ramifications of both smart-phone and computer apparently can be seen.
Within the realm of creating, designing might increase the consequences of creativity. Moreover, fundamental aspects of processing relate to this reality that the demerits of computer pertain to cellphone. As a tangible example, a scientific research undertaken by a prestigious university has asserted that the downside of technology is correlated negatively with social invention. Hence, it is correct to presume the preconceived notion of modern invention.
To conclude, while there are several compelling arguments on both sides, I profoundly believe that the benefits of digital devices far outweigh its drawbacks. Not only do the advantages of electronic device prove the significance of robots, but also pinpoint computer implications.

Votes
Average: 1.1 (1 vote)
Essay Categories

Comments

Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 26, Rule ID: THE_SUPERLATIVE[4]
Message: A determiner is probably missing here: 'of the best'.
Suggestion: of the best
Recently, the phenomenon of best invention and its corresponding impact ...
^^^^^^^
Line 1, column 134, Rule ID: NEW_XX[1]
Message: Use simply 'invention'.
Suggestion: invention
...debate. Although contested by many that new invention is highly beneficial, such issue is reg...
^^^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 1, column 376, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ill analyze that throughout this essay. From patent standpoint, mobile can provi...
^^^

Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, apparently, but, hence, if, moreover, so, thus, well, while, as well as

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 10.5418719212 95% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 6.10837438424 82% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 8.36945812808 60% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 10.0 5.94088669951 168% => OK
Pronoun: 18.0 20.9802955665 86% => OK
Preposition: 29.0 31.9359605911 91% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 5.75862068966 139% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1295.0 1207.87684729 107% => OK
No of words: 227.0 242.827586207 93% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.70484581498 5.00649968141 114% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.88156143495 3.92707691288 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.30366518466 2.71678728327 122% => OK
Unique words: 155.0 139.433497537 111% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.68281938326 0.580463131201 118% => OK
syllable_count: 415.8 379.143842365 110% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.57093596059 115% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 4.6157635468 87% => OK
Article: 2.0 1.56157635468 128% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 1.71428571429 292% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 0.931034482759 215% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 3.65517241379 109% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 12.6551724138 95% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.5024630542 88% => OK
Sentence length SD: 36.1900845843 50.4703680194 72% => OK
Chars per sentence: 107.916666667 104.977214359 103% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.9166666667 20.9669160288 90% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.41666666667 7.25397266985 88% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.33497536946 56% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 6.9802955665 100% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 2.75862068966 36% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 2.91625615764 137% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0406012706623 0.242375264174 17% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0144033285283 0.0925447433944 16% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0362852670773 0.071462118173 51% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0230982290581 0.151781067708 15% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0400073062934 0.0609392437508 66% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.9 12.6369458128 118% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 36.28 53.1260098522 68% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 6.54236453202 171% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 10.9458128079 116% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.78 11.5310837438 137% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 11.21 8.32886699507 135% => OK
difficult_words: 96.0 55.0591133005 174% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.94827586207 116% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.3980295567 88% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.5123152709 114% => OK
What are above readability scores?

---------------------
It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.

Rates: 11.1111111111 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 10.0 Out of 90
---------------------
Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.