What do you think about our environment considering the fact that there has been steady increase in pollution and affects like global warming are increasing as time is passing by? Are we under jeopardy? Is the humanity safe?
Environment around us constitutes of those factors, which influence the survival of all living beings like human being, flora and fauna. If an unbalance occurs in those factors, our existence will be threatened. Whereas, nowadays pollution is increased gradually in the environment, affects like global warming are rising day by day, so we are in the big problem. I will discuss this topic in upcoming paragraphs.
To begin with, more pollution effect on human health, like the people who have breathing and skin problems, pollution is dangerous for them. Moreover, temperature is increasing day by day, which effect on our eyes and other organs and some species of animals are demolishing due to increasing rate of temperature.
Apart from this, if we will not stop the pollution, then humanity is not safe, because due to rise temperature glaciers are melting, which can cause of floods into the sea due to which coastal areas of sea will be effected. Besides this, pollution effects on the azone layer, which is very dangerous for all living beings.
In conclusion, it can be said that people should stop the pollution by growing more and more trees, because this life and environment are gifted us from God, we should always take care of them. So that we should use some precautions
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 23, Rule ID: CONSTITUTES_OF
Message: Did you mean 'consists of'?
Suggestion: consists of
Environment around us constitutes of those factors, which influence the surv...
Line 4, column 194, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT
Message: “So that” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...od, we should always take care of them. So that we should use some precautions
Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, if, moreover, so, then, whereas, apart from, in conclusion, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 10.5418719212 133% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 6.10837438424 147% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 8.36945812808 72% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 5.94088669951 135% => OK
Pronoun: 20.0 20.9802955665 95% => OK
Preposition: 31.0 31.9359605911 97% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 5.75862068966 208% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1074.0 1207.87684729 89% => OK
No of words: 216.0 242.827586207 89% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.97222222222 5.00649968141 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.83365862548 3.92707691288 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.66782382301 2.71678728327 98% => OK
Unique words: 126.0 139.433497537 90% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.583333333333 0.580463131201 100% => OK
syllable_count: 332.1 379.143842365 88% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.57093596059 95% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 4.6157635468 87% => OK
Article: 0.0 1.56157635468 0% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 1.71428571429 292% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.931034482759 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 3.65517241379 137% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 12.6551724138 79% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 20.5024630542 102% => OK
Sentence length SD: 58.3749946467 50.4703680194 116% => OK
Chars per sentence: 107.4 104.977214359 102% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.6 20.9669160288 103% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.2 7.25397266985 113% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.33497536946 37% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 6.9802955665 43% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 2.75862068966 145% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 2.91625615764 103% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.18771653298 0.242375264174 77% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.071256761762 0.0925447433944 77% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0584989324494 0.071462118173 82% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.112302150575 0.151781067708 74% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.054011723313 0.0609392437508 89% => OK
automated_readability_index: 12.8 12.6369458128 101% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 58.62 53.1260098522 110% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.54236453202 47% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 10.9458128079 94% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.55 11.5310837438 100% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.55 8.32886699507 103% => OK
difficult_words: 53.0 55.0591133005 96% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.94827586207 80% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.3980295567 100% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.5123152709 95% => OK
What are above readability scores?
Rates: 77.7777777778 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 70.0 Out of 90
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