When computers first appeared on the scene, it was thought they would make us more productive in providing goods and services, smarter and possibly happier. Skeptics claim that the opposite is true as computers have proved disappointing in terms of productivity, and have made us less happy and more stupid because information is not knowledge.
Which of these points of view do you agree with most? Support your argument with reasons and/or examples from your own experience and observations.
The invention of computers may be one of the most impactful development in the field of science and technology. While some people believe that advent of computers was a boon to the mankind, others think computers made life cumbersome. This essay will discuss the social impact of information technology.
Computers work based on automated algorithms which make them less prone to errors. These machines depend on artificial intelligence and thereby complete their tasks efficiently, thereby improving the productivity. For example, after computers were implemented in retail stores the billing errors decreased by around fifty percentage. These trends show that computers helped the society to become smarter and more productive.
Technology sometimes make some people unhappy and mundane. This is because, they think computers and robotic intelligence make people less creative. But studies show that this belief is not scientifically proven. On the other hand, latest technologies tend to aid people in their intelligent thinking and thereby helps to implement new ideas.
This essay discussed how computers help the world to be more productive and make people smarter. Overall, it is clear that people who uses information technology effectively can reap huge benefits from it by making their life easier and happier.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 231, Rule ID: THE_SUPERLATIVE[2]
Message: A determiner is probably missing here: ', the latest'.
Suggestion: , the latest
...scientifically proven. On the other hand, latest technologies tend to aid people in thei...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, may, so, while, for example, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 10.5418719212 66% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 6.10837438424 49% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 8.36945812808 108% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 5.94088669951 101% => OK
Pronoun: 17.0 20.9802955665 81% => OK
Preposition: 22.0 31.9359605911 69% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 5.75862068966 139% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1133.0 1207.87684729 94% => OK
No of words: 201.0 242.827586207 83% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.6368159204 5.00649968141 113% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.76529505866 3.92707691288 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.86650934412 2.71678728327 106% => OK
Unique words: 130.0 139.433497537 93% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.646766169154 0.580463131201 111% => OK
syllable_count: 354.6 379.143842365 94% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.57093596059 115% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 4.6157635468 152% => OK
Article: 1.0 1.56157635468 64% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.71428571429 117% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.931034482759 107% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 3.65517241379 55% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 12.6551724138 103% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 20.5024630542 73% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 27.3539153759 50.4703680194 54% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 87.1538461538 104.977214359 83% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.4615384615 20.9669160288 74% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.23076923077 7.25397266985 58% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.33497536946 19% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 6.9802955665 86% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 2.75862068966 109% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 2.91625615764 137% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.171641180267 0.242375264174 71% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0645366235923 0.0925447433944 70% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0578987390126 0.071462118173 81% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.108723365237 0.151781067708 72% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0276679996348 0.0609392437508 45% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.9 12.6369458128 102% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 39.33 53.1260098522 74% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.54236453202 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 10.9458128079 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.14 11.5310837438 131% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.49 8.32886699507 114% => OK
difficult_words: 65.0 55.0591133005 118% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 9.94827586207 75% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.3980295567 77% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.5123152709 76% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Rates: 61.1111111111 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 55.0 Out of 90
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