Some people prefer to spend their holidays in resorts where everything is organized for them and they take little interest in the country they are visiting. Others prefer to travel around the country and to see how the people live, to get to know their customs and traditions and cuisine.
Write an essay on which type of foreign travel you think is best for both the tourist and the local community.
Tourism has become a major source of income for many countries across the globe. Modern means of transport offers tourists with a variety of options for organizing their trip, including resort stay packaged tours or roaming freely across the nation they are visiting. This essay will discuss which of these is more beneficial to the community; packaged resort trips or tourists organizing the trip themselves.
Any international trip becomes more interesting and fun, only when the local attractions are visited and ethnic cuisine is tasted. When people go for a trip organized by a resort, the local flavor will be missing. Most often such a tour will not provide full entertainment to travelers. This is especially true when the resort is located in a bustling, cosmopolitan town where most of the population will be urban. It is clear that tourists will miss the rural vibes of the country.
While some people believe that tourists will feel safer in a resort setting, rather than traveling around the country, many tourists think otherwise. Moreover, safety should be considered before the trip itself. If the destination does not seem safe to go, the trip should be planned to elsewhere. So, this aspect does not show any benefit about opting for resort tours.
This essay discussed some advantages and disadvantages of organized tours versus unorganized trips. Overall, it is evident that tourists and communities benefit, if tourists travel around the country and visit the local neighborhoods and attractions.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, moreover, so, while
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 10.5418719212 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 6.10837438424 131% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 8.36945812808 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 5.94088669951 135% => OK
Pronoun: 14.0 20.9802955665 67% => OK
Preposition: 21.0 31.9359605911 66% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 5.75862068966 52% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1283.0 1207.87684729 106% => OK
No of words: 244.0 242.827586207 100% => OK
Chars per words: 5.25819672131 5.00649968141 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.95227774224 3.92707691288 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.72837260383 2.71678728327 100% => OK
Unique words: 148.0 139.433497537 106% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.606557377049 0.580463131201 104% => OK
syllable_count: 393.3 379.143842365 104% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.57093596059 102% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 4.6157635468 130% => OK
Article: 2.0 1.56157635468 128% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 1.71428571429 233% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.931034482759 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 3.65517241379 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 12.6551724138 111% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.5024630542 83% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 37.802453759 50.4703680194 75% => OK
Chars per sentence: 91.6428571429 104.977214359 87% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.4285714286 20.9669160288 83% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.64285714286 7.25397266985 23% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.33497536946 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 6.9802955665 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 2.75862068966 181% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 2.91625615764 34% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.166019712817 0.242375264174 68% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0543718040415 0.0925447433944 59% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0490320235339 0.071462118173 69% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.102291050246 0.151781067708 67% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0274738114488 0.0609392437508 45% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.1 12.6369458128 96% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 54.22 53.1260098522 102% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.54236453202 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 10.9458128079 90% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.93 11.5310837438 112% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.2 8.32886699507 110% => OK
difficult_words: 73.0 55.0591133005 133% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.94827586207 116% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.3980295567 85% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.5123152709 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 75.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 67.5 Out of 90
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