Whether design of building will have a positive or negative impact on people's life and work?
One of the most conspicuous trends of today’s world is a colossal upsurge in a number of people who believe that effective design of building brings a positive attitude among employees towards work. There is a widespread worry this will only lead to a myriad of concerns in employees’ life. As such, there are both merits and demerits to this trend, although I am of the opinion that former outdo the latter.
On the one hand, there are a number of benefits that can be attributed to the design of the buildings. The most preponderant one stems from the fact is that by having well designed and constructed building the company can make employees' comfortable and feel proud towards their working condition. Not only do these buildings attract them to do hard work, but they also feel much more confident when they work in a well- structured environment. Needless to say, all these merits stand worker in good stead as far as their satisfaction is concerned.
On the flip side, there are, however, some pitfalls that can easily overwhelm the benefits of effectively designed of the building. The primary one stems from the fact is that the company needs to spend a huge budget of money to construct a building as per the latest technological way of construction. Besides, this will only incline the cost of the company on the effective design of building whether the aim of the organization is to improve the production of the products. Hence, it is evident why many are in against the well-structured building.
In view of the arguments outlined above, one can conclude that despite having some drawbacks, the benefits of appropriate building design are indeed too great to ignore.
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Suggestion:
...far as their satisfaction is concerned. There are, however, some pitfalls that c...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, hence, however, if, so, well
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 10.5418719212 123% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 6.10837438424 82% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 8.36945812808 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 9.0 5.94088669951 151% => OK
Pronoun: 19.0 20.9802955665 91% => OK
Preposition: 39.0 31.9359605911 122% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 5.75862068966 52% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1282.0 1207.87684729 106% => OK
No of words: 261.0 242.827586207 107% => OK
Chars per words: 4.91187739464 5.00649968141 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.0193898071 3.92707691288 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.76701044354 2.71678728327 102% => OK
Unique words: 148.0 139.433497537 106% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.567049808429 0.580463131201 98% => OK
syllable_count: 391.5 379.143842365 103% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.57093596059 95% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 4.6157635468 43% => OK
Article: 3.0 1.56157635468 192% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.71428571429 117% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.931034482759 107% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 3.65517241379 27% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 12.6551724138 95% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.5024630542 102% => OK
Sentence length SD: 36.8317307344 50.4703680194 73% => OK
Chars per sentence: 106.833333333 104.977214359 102% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.75 20.9669160288 104% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.0 7.25397266985 55% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.33497536946 19% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 6.9802955665 129% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 2.75862068966 36% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 2.91625615764 69% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.263254444107 0.242375264174 109% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0770918373072 0.0925447433944 83% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0670472989775 0.071462118173 94% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.13597998856 0.151781067708 90% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0610018334086 0.0609392437508 100% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.6 12.6369458128 100% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 58.62 53.1260098522 110% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.54236453202 47% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 10.9458128079 94% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.2 11.5310837438 97% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.37 8.32886699507 100% => OK
difficult_words: 61.0 55.0591133005 111% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.94827586207 106% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.3980295567 100% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.5123152709 105% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 80.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 72.0 Out of 90
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