Whether design of building will have a positive or negative impact on people's life and work? Do you agree or disagree?
Of late, there has been a colossal upsurge among the prodigies discussing the influence of building on an individual’s life as well as working environment. Some people think that the design of the building bears no effect on a person, while others maintain that the architecture of the building has many benefits on people’s personal and working life. This essay will discuss the positive impacts of building on the working and private life of an individual.
At the outset, there are myriad of arguments associated with the design of the building. Firstly, the most conspicuous is the uplifting of moral and boosting the work efficiency with more zeal and zest. The interior layout of the building encompassing all safety measures, for example, proper fire exist, an air conditioned environment and well structured offices not only provides a safe working environment but also the employees perform job with more enthusiasm and dedication. Thus, needless to say, all these associated merits of a building will have a far-reaching positive effects on an individual.
On the other hand, another pivotal facet pertaining to this argument is that well structured and designed buildings is the penetration and exposure of natural resources to the residents or workers. Sunlight has Vitamin ‘D’ which is an essential element for survival of human beings. For instance, a study in “Time magazine” has revealed that 40% of people working in closed offices are Vitamin ‘D’ deficient. As a matter of fact, one of the most important aspect of well designed buildings is provisioning of Vitamin ‘D’ to maintain a healthy life.
To recapitulate, foregoing discussion propounds that well designed and structured building not only motivates a worker and boosts his pace but also provides exposure to natural resources for a healthy life.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 581, Rule ID: A_PLURAL[2]
Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'effect'?
Suggestion: effect
...lding will have a far-reaching positive effects on an individual. On the other hand...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, if, so, thus, well, while, for example, for instance, as a matter of fact, as well as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 10.5418719212 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 6.10837438424 33% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 8.36945812808 155% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 5.94088669951 101% => OK
Pronoun: 9.0 20.9802955665 43% => OK
Preposition: 37.0 31.9359605911 116% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 5.75862068966 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1592.0 1207.87684729 132% => OK
No of words: 293.0 242.827586207 121% => OK
Chars per words: 5.43344709898 5.00649968141 109% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.13729897018 3.92707691288 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.12395773484 2.71678728327 115% => OK
Unique words: 155.0 139.433497537 111% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.529010238908 0.580463131201 91% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 496.8 379.143842365 131% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.57093596059 108% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 4.6157635468 22% => OK
Article: 4.0 1.56157635468 256% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 2.0 1.71428571429 117% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.931034482759 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 3.65517241379 137% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 12.6551724138 95% => OK
Sentence length: 24.0 20.5024630542 117% => OK
Sentence length SD: 53.8291407036 50.4703680194 107% => OK
Chars per sentence: 132.666666667 104.977214359 126% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.4166666667 20.9669160288 116% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.9166666667 7.25397266985 150% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.33497536946 19% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 6.9802955665 158% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 2.75862068966 36% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 2.91625615764 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.326479981002 0.242375264174 135% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.126975283071 0.0925447433944 137% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0775604289289 0.071462118173 109% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.192928000745 0.151781067708 127% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0993216677964 0.0609392437508 163% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.4 12.6369458128 130% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 38.66 53.1260098522 73% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.54236453202 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.8 10.9458128079 126% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.51 11.5310837438 126% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.35 8.32886699507 112% => OK
difficult_words: 84.0 55.0591133005 153% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.94827586207 111% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.3980295567 112% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.5123152709 114% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 77.7777777778 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 70.0 Out of 90
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